People have different opinions on what behaviors can be damaging for a friendship. Some may think that demanding money from friends has a negative impact on the relationship, while others are of different opinions about damaging factors for friendship. I don’t regard borrowing money harmful for friendship as there are other important factors that play a more important role in this regard.
Borrowing money for a friend is just a form of getting help which is not a negative factor for friendship in itself. A good friendship takes variety of factors including honesty, kindness, common interests, and giving help which can be seen in various situations. We don’t choose friends only for having funs and for going outside and having entertainment. We are not strong enough to live without getting help from other people around us including our friends. Sometimes we need an advice from our fiends, sometimes we need to use the experience of our friends about a matter, and sometimes we may borrow money because we are in a bad financial situation. Borrowing money from a friend means that we promise to pay it back to our friend in a time period that we promise and it is definitely not an uncommon thing among friends who trust each other. We give money to our friends in times when they are needy and they give us money or other kinds of helps when we need them. Therefore, there is no point in regarding borrowing money as damage to our friendship as long as we are faithful to our promises.
The harmful factors that contribute the deterioration of a friendship are very different form borrowing money. What is damaging for a friendship include lying, disloyalty, untruthfulness, insolence, accusing etc. These are very different from getting help from a friend in the form of borrowing money. What may cause some people to think that borrowing money is damaging is the lack of truth between friends that may come from failing to do promises of paying back the money borrowed. Of course it would make harm to the friendship if we don’t pay back the money or we postpone it to another time for several times. Therefore, in this case, it is the failing of friendship obligations that makes harm to friendship, not just the act of borrowing money. I know several friends of mine and other people around me who borrow money from each other in times of need without any problem in their friendship. Hence, it cannot be something harmful for friendship.
Generally speaking, borrowing money from friends is not something negative for friendship in itself, as true friends are found in times of need and help. We need our friends and they need us. Borrowing money from friends is just a form of getting help and as long as we pay it back and don’t compromise or trusts, there would be no problem with that.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
... be damaging for a friendship. Some may think that demanding money from friends has a...
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Line 2, column 486, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...ncluding our friends. Sometimes we need an advice from our fiends, sometimes we need to u...
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Line 2, column 1110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ong as we are faithful to our promises. The harmful factors that contribute the ...
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Line 4, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, there would be no problem with that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, while, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2345.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82510288066 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69323329164 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.388888888889 0.524837075471 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 707.4 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6385244494 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.590909091 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86363636364 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253245782058 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103822421483 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451262098829 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188532163125 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435633264323 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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