Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your
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I strongly agree with the statement that people are never satisfied with what they have and they always want more. This can be seen in many all fields and carriers in the worlds. Below are some of the familiar fields in which people always hungry to gain more.
Take for example the field of sport, when first people take steps is this filed their only goal may be their health or maybe being a successful in a local club. As they achieve these goals and their confidence enhances, their goal changes and they want to be champions in a larger scale like regional or national level. After being champion in these levels, this no longer satisfies them and they want to be world champions and they try and struggle for that. We will see tons of these examples in our life who have wanted more over time. Conner McGregor is one of the best examples in this respect as he first started to fight so as to gain enough money to live but after that he started to be exercise for national championship. And after being a national champion he dreamed of being a world champion and after 3 years of hard exercises he became the new ufc champion of the world.
Another example can be seen in financial possessions that people have. For instance, when we have not enough money we want to earn money so as to live a normal life and just be independent others. But when we earn that amount of money and we gain confidence, we want to earn more to live better and buy luxury stuff. When we buy a beautiful house and live in it for some time we again want to a buy a newer and more expensive home after we earn more money. We always try to earn more money and this has always been a simple reason why some people gain millions or billions.
Field of science is one of the great examples of this behavior. Scientists are never satisfied with their results and their achievement. As the do a research and get some results, they see new things and they want to know more about their research fields, as a results, they try more and more and they publish articles after articles, This way science advances and develops. We see this hungriness in any fields of science and scientists have a great taste to know more about the universe.
In conclusion, our hungriness for having more is always there. People in any fields want always more than what they currently have and this is not always bad. It is one of the main reasons for improvements in their life and their societies as a whole.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
...s and carriers in the worlds. Below are some of the familiar fields in which people always ...
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Suggestion:
... local club. As they achieve these goals and their confidence enhances, their goa...
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...hey want to be world champions and they try and struggle for that. We will see tons of ...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...is respect as he first started to fight so as to gain enough money to live but after tha...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... not enough money we want to earn money so as to live a normal life and just be independ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...their results and their achievement. As the do a research and get some results, they s...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...ow more about their research fields, as a results, they try more and more and they publis...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'want'.
Suggestion: always want
...e is always there. People in any fields want always more than what they currently have and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42543859649 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27850349526 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.410087719298 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1696725661 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0952380952 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04761904762 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242676126521 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096974744502 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126427155836 0.0737576698707 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189138015831 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108186251638 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.