Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses
should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons
and examples to support your position
I strongly agree with the statement that businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Though business should give people quality goods and service, however, we cannot deny that the main goal of business is to make money or profit. If business earns every good thing except money, it will not survive in the market.
Why people start businesses? Everyone knows that the answer to this question is that people want to earn money and profits. And there are specific rules with which people can make profits through their businesses. Making quality products and services which are the real needs of people, enough advertisements, and sometimes bragging about the products in order to convince people to buy them are general rules that businesses should do. In order to sell and make profits. If a company for example does not apply these rules it will survive in the market and there will be a dark fate waiting for it. Although we can agree that to some extent businesses should be truthful in the eyes of people and businesses should not give bad products to the costumers, however, the main goal of business is to make profits and money by any possible way.
If businesses try only to behave in moral frames and try to make profits in complete accordance with moral laws, their failure in the market will be highly likely. This is because making enough profit in the market is the only thing that will guarantee businesses survival in the market. Take for example a company that tells all truth about the product in the advertisement. If this company shows the flaws of the products for the sake of truth, people may immediately dismiss the product and the profit that could be given by selling the product will be lost and the company faces bankruptcy after a while. Hence, Businesses should keep making profits as their main goal and should do anything to make profit in the market.
Consequently, though gaining people’s favor is good for businesses, but we should not deny the fact that businesses should do anything to make profits because making profits is their main goals and their main reason of survival in the market.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8027027027 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40903006588 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424324324324 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6070620849 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0625 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309588216832 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133220976583 0.076458572812 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141363797225 0.0737576698707 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238006490368 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055734370219 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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