Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses
should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons
and examples to support your position.
I strongly agree with the statement that businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Though business should give people quality goods and service, however, we cannot deny that the main goal of business is to make money or profit because a huge amount of recourses including human work, time, and money is at stake for running a business and all spending all these things are only logical when businesses can make enough profit through any possible ways.
The ability to attract costumers is critical for businesses. They should present quality products and services to their customers in order to get their truth and make profits and survive in the market. We all know that fraud or selling low quality products to people is not acceptable and business on day will pay for that however, as long as people’s goodness is taken into consideration the most important thing behind running business is to make profit in any possible ways because this is the thing guarantee their life in the market.
The most important reason for the need to make profit is that businesses spend lots of money during different stages of their life. From starting point of business people spend huge amount of money on hiring employees, training them, making products, and advertising. Sometimes the money spent on these things is up to millions and even billions of dollars in big businesses. So there is a lot at stake when running a business and spending these types of spending is not logical when businesses cannot make profits. There should be enough profits for companies and businesses that cover these spending.
Another important reason for making profits as a primary reason of a running as business is that huge amount of time is needed to start and run a business. Months.. and years of times is spent to make products and services and selling them. Is there logic behind wasting a lot of time without making profits? Absolutely no, these precious times could be used elsewhere to make profits therefore, businesses should gain as much profits as possible so that these time spending be logical. Otherwise, there will be a huge loss for businesses if they don’t make enough profits and wasting huge amount of time is something that cannot be regained.
In conclusion, based on the fact that lots of resources including human resources, time, and money are needed to run a business, therefore, making enough profits should be the main priority of businesses. We agree that businesses should take people’s relative satisfaction into their consideration however, they should make profits by every possible ways in order to survive in the market.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for running a business and all spending all these things are only logical when ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iness and all spending all these things are only logical when businesses can mak...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...eded to start and run a business. Months.. and years of times is spent to make pro...
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Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...d to start and run a business. Months.. and years of times is spent to make product...
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Line 4, column 422, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ts therefore, businesses should gain as much profits as possible so that these time ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2214.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98648648649 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56247321385 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.407657657658 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.5294531897 48.9658058833 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.235294118 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1176470588 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41176470588 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262338209234 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114618723702 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123498457822 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173719344019 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075325962174 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.