Large amount of money is important or earn money for only comfortable living is important.
This is the controversial issue whether the large amount of money is important or money for only comfortable living is important. However, in my perspective, I believe that make big amount of money is important, because of living happily in old age, travel wherever we want, make good treatment of health and to living comfortable as well.
First of all, I think that money is everything. Without money we can't do anything in our life. In oldest age children grow up and start to live alone with their family or go other places to make their career and doing job and old person have to live alone. With money they can put the person in salary to take care of them.
Secondaly, I am of the opinion that we need money for traveling the world. If we want to go the Mountain Everest (the biggest mountain of the world) but we don't have enough money, then what can we do? Then here is only one option, we have to compromise with our feeling, with our desire, interest and with our need as well.
Moreover, I assume that if we don't have enough money then we can't receive the good treatment of our health. My personal experience is the compelling example of this. In my village, my neighbor had the blood cancer and he want to get good treatment of him and he want to live his life but the money was problem! His family can't go in good hospital. What can we do without money? We only watch him to going to die and finally he left this beautiful world because of lack of money..
Finally, with money we can live comfortable life as well, We can buy a nice house, new model of car, popular mobile device or laptop and tablet as well. We can buy anything which we want.
As a result, from money we can live happily in our oldest period when nobody at home to care of us. We can go anywhere to enjoy our vacation or to enjoy our life. We can get regular checkup of our health and receive good treatment too. And we can live comfortabelly as well. That's why, I believe that, large amount of money is very important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, i think, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33687002653 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31517127051 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453580901857 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.763157879 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8571428571 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9523809524 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309137923999 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124157796329 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15112734042 0.0737576698707 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203917811698 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160242996787 0.0645574589148 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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