children should be required to help to learn cooking as soon as they are able to do so.
I believe that, learning cooking is very helpful for students. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, cooking food is cheaper than buying food. Student can save some money for their personal needs and can take extra tuition classes with the save money. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I leave my mom dad house and started to live alone for my study, I feel very easy. This is because my parents already teached me how to cook food. My friends are expense a lot of money to buying food however, I save my money to cook at home. From the save money I buy my book or clothes or many essential things for me. Consequently, I am agree with the learning how to cook as small age.
Secondly, Now a days we can see a lot of chemical mixed food in market but healthy food is necessary for all people. If we prepare at home we can eat healthy food. If we eat healthy food we became a strong and we cam give all of our attention on the study. If we not feel well we have to go to the doctor and take a rest too. Because of health problem we lost our money and study time as well. As a result, I am concede that gain knowledge about cooking in early age is very helpful for students.
In conclusion, I'm of the opinion that it is great idea to learn about the cook when we are able to learn. This is because to save money and to become healthy. Therefore, personally , I concur that children should be required to help to learn cooking as soon as they are able to do so.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
I believe that, learning cooking is very helpful for students. I feel th...
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Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng food however, I save my money to cook at home. From the save money I buy my bo...
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Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ntial things for me. Consequently, I am agree with the learning how to cook as small ...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...g how to cook as small age. Secondly, Now a days we can see a lot of chemical mixed food...
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Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...w to cook as small age. Secondly, Now a days we can see a lot of chemical mixed food...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...althy food is necessary for all people. If we prepare at home we can eat healthy f...
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Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...give all of our attention on the study. If we not feel well we have to go to the d...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'conceded'.
Suggestion: conceded
... study time as well. As a result, I am concede that gain knowledge about cooking in ea...
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Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...early age is very helpful for students. In conclusion, Im of the opinion that it...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...elpful for students. In conclusion, Im of the opinion that it is great idea to...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it is great idea to learn about the cook when we are able to learn. This is becau...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to become healthy. Therefore, personally , I concur that children should be requir...
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Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
...ren should be required to help to learn cooking as soon as they are able to do so.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15333333333 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24080406472 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536666666667 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8967331253 48.9658058833 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.5789473684 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7894736842 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211807360105 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798850840953 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.183883657069 0.0737576698707 249% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195206330752 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.234653390074 0.0645574589148 363% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 11.7677419355 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 10.9000537634 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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