A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer."
this topic raises the controversial issue whether "a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college." different people may have different positions on this issue. we can't generalize the accurate truth of this recommendation. however, in my perspective, I believe that the truthfulness of the given recommendation is limited. but I am consonant with this topic.
first reason for my belief is that, same curriculum helps the student to study with another school student also. they can take competition with another school's students. school level students are small children or teenager age student. they are too small to take special subject for study. they don't know about their interest or ability. so, they can't take specific course for study. if they study same books than they can grow as same rate also.
another reason for my belief is that, if students want to change school for any reason during the study time period, same curriculum helps them to adjust in new school.
perhaps the best reason is, student should keep the all general knowledge because they need all simple knowledge in their life. For example-if any small child is good on science, then nation can give that child to more science knowledge because he/she good in science but if nation not give him or her math knowledge than how he or she can go to market for soaping. For all these reasons, I believe that nation should give all general knowledge to small children and after enter college nation should give the knowledge on which students have good ability.
The examples above all support the idea that we find same national curriculum is good for small children. ultimately, after considering both sides of the issue, it must be concluded that nation should require same national curriculum until they enter college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 33.0505617978 242% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3139.0 2235.4752809 140% => OK
No of words: 617.0 442.535393258 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08752025932 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98392262146 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.513972261 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.254457050243 0.4932671777 52% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 957.6 704.065955056 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 6.24550561798 288% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.825182955 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3235294118 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1470588235 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.67647058824 5.21951772744 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.97078651685 201% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 38.0 7.80617977528 487% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398693419347 0.243740707755 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121918188092 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109822130643 0.0758088955206 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222130700602 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779246592 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.76 8.38706741573 69% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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