Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children
Now a day we live in a modern society that everything is as far as a button. In the last decades, many inventions established by scientists to improve life quality and caliber. Some people, including me, believe that life today is easier and more convenient than it was when our grandparents were children, sixty or seventy years ago. However, others believe the opposite to this opinion, I firmly insist on my opinion.
In this essay, I am going to explain three reasons in many aspects of life.
First of all, with the invention of the internet, too many works get done easier and faster. Internet distributed all over the world very quickly and everyone has access to it. In consequence of this, people are able to connect with each other easily or doing works from home. For example, I work as a freelancer so I am able to sit on my couch and do works remotely since my grandparents had to go far from home to reach their office or to give some files to their colleagues. Actually, this invention made our life too comfortable.
Secondly, also many developments in medical science and improvised hospital equipment, doctors are able to detect diseases and therapy them carefully, while those days all appliances were primary and simple. Doctors now can care of you even when they are not with you. They can measure your heart rate, blood pressure and other things with new inventions. These things were not possible before 70 years back. People now can receive reliable and fast services.
Finally, today's transportation facilities. If we compare it with earlier transportation, now we are better than earlier. Now a day all transportation facilities are available everywhere and more frequency. We have more transportation options like bus, taxi, car, train, airways, etc. All these make our life better and easy to travel with the least time and safely. For example, you have travel 1000 Km like from Iran to America then you required more than a month but now a day about the maximum one day you can reach there by airways. It becomes so easy and comfortable for us.
In conclusion, I tried to explain many aspects of developments countries, in order to indicate that people who lived many years ago challenged with huge problems which made their lives hard.
We now really live in calmness and peace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83123425693 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68181655651 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584382871537 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.7531231571 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9166666667 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5416666667 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54166666667 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212199745886 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517851896632 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914463100879 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823722624047 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953370714228 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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