life worsen
Earth, as we all know, is the most precious asset human beings have. Due to the paramount effect of the environment on peoples’ life, efforts for elevating its effectiveness have always been among the top priorities of experts. In this regard, many believe that human activities deteriorate the earth and make it a bad place for living. Similarly, I believe that the effect of humankind, especially the negative ones, make living harder and harder by passaging the time. I will delve into two conspicuous reasons to elaborate on my standpoint.
The first reason that makes me hold the belief that mankind functions worsen living on earth is related to their effect on weather that affects other species’ life. Undoubtedly, historical inventions that lead humans to use materials like coals and fuels, through entering gases like CO2 manipulating the natural balance and endanger not only human beings life but also other species’ life. Indeed, on the one hand, people indefinite ways of using fossil fuels like in launching cars, burning, heating, cooling, establishing factories, and on the other hand, limitless greed of governments in exploiting fossil fuels as an income means, increase the amount of these gases and make everything against the earth weather. While a limited amount of greenhouse gases are indispensable for living creatures and producing it is inevitable, the problem is the presence of a large amount of these gases in the atmosphere. Although many critics may challenge this idea and debate that greenhouse gases like CO2 make a living on earth available, an increasing number of documents that show their exceeding amount have harmful effects on the environment show otherwise. In other meaning, either people or governments should be conservative about utilizing and producing gases. The ample amounts of greenhouse gases make the weather warmer, so change the inhabitants, and therefore, make living intolerable for the majority of animals on earth, so as a result of changing weather, many of them have become extinct.
Another equally noteworthy reason to bear in mind is war and its notorious influence on human societies. Without a doubt, as the majority of sociologists assert, the most civilized humans-who enjoy education, technology, and welfare-are living in this century; they are one of the most generations who are engaged in war, though. Apparently, one of the critical factors of civilization is peace and the ability to live with others in a peaceful manner. Needless to say, many nations are tackling with war and its negative side effects because of social or political issues. Therefore, it means humans miss their way to civilization and make a living on earth much harder in comparison with the past. Generally speaking, for people who endure war, it is more likely to escape their hometown and migrate to another land. Scientifically speaking, people who migrate because of the war, since they feel forced to leave their country to save their lives, cannot tolerate their new place very well, and hypothetically they will have a challenge with depression or cultural shocks more than people who deliberately want to migrate. Thus, people’s activities make life harder for others.
To summarize, contemplating all remarks, we can safely conclude that people’s behavior toward both their nature and themselves should be changed as soon as possible. What would happen if humans continued what they did in the past? The more violent activities mankind show, the more deteriorated circumstances they will endure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, if, may, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3009.0 1977.66487455 152% => OK
No of words: 568.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29753521127 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88187981987 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8323777104 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 301.0 212.727598566 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529929577465 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 951.3 618.680645161 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.1898142903 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.826086957 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6956521739 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95652173913 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0873177896829 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273543583742 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633579246567 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.044451603426 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397463914941 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 161.0 86.8835125448 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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