Live in big city or small city

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Live in big city or small city

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Average: 7 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ountry is fresh and without pollutions. Also they always eat fresh foods and fruits ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, second, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2576.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 515.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00194174757 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93511444168 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491262135922 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 809.1 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5891414983 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3913043478 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21739130435 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372103551474 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105483121982 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799982282591 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251717373844 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636676796425 0.0645574589148 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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from different country, different religious,
from different countries, different religions,

children who bringing up in a big town, almost successful in their lives.
children who are bringing up in a big town, are almost successful in their lives.
children bringing up in a big town are almost successful in their lives.

people who live in a big town can use healthy food due the high-tech facilities
people who live in a big town can use healthy food due to the high-tech facilities

Considering the afore-mentioned arguments and discussion,
Considering the afore-mentioned arguments and discussions,

it is not rational underestimate the advantages of city life
it is not rational to underestimate the advantages of city life

flaws:
1. No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2 //you have grammatical issues.

2. The introduction is too long. Can make it shorter. Simply put your ideas/options. Don't need to compare over there.

3. Better to break the second paragraph down to 2-3 paragraphs. It is too long. and Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

4. No. of Words: 516 350 //make sure you can finish the essay writing in 30 minutes. 350 - 450 words are actually enough.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 516 350
No. of Characters: 2499 1500
No. of Different Words: 244 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.766 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.843 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.782 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 184 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 126 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.435 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.223 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.522 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.325 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.458 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5