Live in big city or small city

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Live in big city or small city

Living in an appropriate and convenient accommodation has always been thought to be a crucial factor by most of the people. Had people realized the significance and advantages of living in a big city, they would have deliberated on living in a town meticulously. Nowadays, a majority of people concur that living in a big town is exciting, on the contrary to this popular view, there are those who subscribe to idea that living in a small town is easier and cheaper. In my opinion, the virtues of the city life significantly outweigh those of the country life. I incline to the city life for some reasons, among which the issue of health, the quality of life, and children’s upbringing are more considerable.

A subtle explanation to why I prefer to live in big city, rest on the fact that the physical as well as mental health are important factors to live better throughout the human life. The accessibility of the experienced doctors, modern hospitals, advance level of hygiene, and varied training facilities in physical and mental grounds which a city enjoys guarantee its people’s health. Besides, putting the discussion in a further context, the second reason why I opt to live in a big city is that quality of city life such as public transportation, high-speed internet, greater variety of people is better than country life. Transportation is easier in a city. There are usually buses and taxies, and some cities have subways. You can easily travel by public transportation. In addition, big cities have people from different country, different religious, different races which make city life exciting than country life. The lasts but not the least, decent upbringing of children plays a crucial role in family and social solidarity of any given society. Statistics in our country reveals that children who bringing up in a big town, almost successful in their lives. High-quality educational conditions, state-of-the-art facilities such as libraries can help them to study in famous universities which they can find high-paid jobs easily.

Having touched on the idea that aspect, I tend to discuss it from another perspective as well. Some people believed that country life is better than city life. They claim that living in a small town is easier and cheaper. Also, the weather in country is fresh and without pollutions. Also they always eat fresh foods and fruits so they are healthier than those live in a big city which always eat processed and junked food. This may be true to some extent; however, the fact that people who live in a big town can use healthy food due the high-tech facilities which keep them fresh.

Considering the afore-mentioned arguments and discussion, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that it is not rational underestimate the advantages of city life to the uneventful of country life. The quality of city life is crystal-clear for everyone, how disastrous it might be when one realizes that he or she has spent all the time in boring and low quality of country life instead of living in exciting and energetic conditions.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ountry is fresh and without pollutions. Also they always eat fresh foods and fruits ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, second, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2576.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 515.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00194174757 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93511444168 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491262135922 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 809.1 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5891414983 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3913043478 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21739130435 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372103551474 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105483121982 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799982282591 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251717373844 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636676796425 0.0645574589148 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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from different country, different religious,
from different countries, different religions,

children who bringing up in a big town, almost successful in their lives.
children who are bringing up in a big town, are almost successful in their lives.
children bringing up in a big town are almost successful in their lives.

people who live in a big town can use healthy food due the high-tech facilities
people who live in a big town can use healthy food due to the high-tech facilities

Considering the afore-mentioned arguments and discussion,
Considering the afore-mentioned arguments and discussions,

it is not rational underestimate the advantages of city life
it is not rational to underestimate the advantages of city life

flaws:
1. No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2 //you have grammatical issues.

2. The introduction is too long. Can make it shorter. Simply put your ideas/options. Don't need to compare over there.

3. Better to break the second paragraph down to 2-3 paragraphs. It is too long. and Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

4. No. of Words: 516 350 //make sure you can finish the essay writing in 30 minutes. 350 - 450 words are actually enough.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 516 350
No. of Characters: 2499 1500
No. of Different Words: 244 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.766 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.843 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.782 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 184 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 126 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.435 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.223 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.522 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.325 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.458 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5