Some people prefer to live in small town. Other prefer to live in big city. Which place would you prefer to live in?
My friend is a sociologist “he always believes that living in big cities have some advantages. On the other hand, living in small town also has some advantages. A famous Afghan philosopher has a proverb that says “coins have two side” it means that living in big cities have some opportunities like good jobs, studying in best universities, have allot fans, cinema, theaters. However, some disadvantage like air pollution. So, living in small town has some good things like quite place, pure weather … however, has some bad things like lack of jobs or jobless, has not good universities or schools. So, I prefer to live in big city. Due to, I can have more opportunities and it is very important for me.
First of all, living in big city has a chance for active people they can find good jobs with high pay. However, I want explain a short story. I lived in Kabul (it is the capital of Afghanistan) during my studying I find a part time job and they paid more than 100 dollar monthly. So, after my graduation I find another job in ministry of commerce. It is a big opportunity working in government office in my country. Therefore, for this reason I can say I prefer to live in big city, because it is full of opportunity and good luck for active people same as me.
Second, when people prefer to live in big cities one cause is studying in famous universities. For example, my friend he lives in Tokyo. So, i always ask this question that why you choice Tokyo? And he respond me, because Tokyo has best universities in Asia. He says that “after my graduation I can continue my profession as minster in Afghanistan or I can teach as professor in Kabul University. It a chance for people how lives in big cities they can studying in best universities. However, I prefer to live in big city.
Last but not least, when people live in big city they must have more entertainment and they can find that in big city. For example, after 18 hours working. They need some fans and it is achievable in big cities. Big cities have cinema for watching different movies comic, action or they can visit theaters and watching new drama like Romeo and Juliet. However, it is the best when you think about this things. So, I prefer to live in big city.
To sum up, living in big city has more opportunities like good jobs in best company like IBM or people can continue their studying in best universities like Tokyo University and find good opportunities in different places. So, they can have best entertainment like visit cinemas, theaters. On the other hand, live in big city has some disadvantages like air pollution, noise. Living in small town has good thing like completely quite with any pollutions like noises, air pollution. However, I prefer to live in big city.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ities and it is very important for me. First of all, living in big city has a c...
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...Afghanistan during my studying I find a part time job and they paid more than 100 dollar ...
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...rt time job and they paid more than 100 dollar monthly. So, after my graduation I find...
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...ities in different places. So, they can have best entertainment like visit cinemas, theat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2289.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63360323887 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67585992908 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.398785425101 0.524837075471 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 734.4 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.7018990789 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8387096774 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.935483871 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.51612903226 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382356934213 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152256245657 0.076458572812 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169747741607 0.0737576698707 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260057219309 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425523154818 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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