Live in one place?
It’s believed that people want to find a comfortable and suitable place to live. Some prefer to stay in a certain place for their entire life, while others enjoy the change of moving around. In my opinion, I prefer the former, meaning that I agree with this statement.
To begin with, if I move to a new place, I need to spend time getting familiar with the place. For example, I need to find out where the hospital is or where can i have gourmet food. Nevertheless, I find it exhausting to keep doing such things. Since I can develop a fixed living pattern in a certain city, it will make my life easier.
Second, when you are going to move to a new place, you must clean up the old place and pack up everything you have. Furthermore, you need to carry all of them to the new place, which often is a huge task. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in college, I needed to move from the dormitory to the department that I rented outside of the campus. Even though my parents came to help me, it took us a lot of time and effort to complete the task. We all felt tired after everything was settled down. Therefore, I will choose not to keep moving the dwelling place.
Last but not least, although some people enjoy the change of moving around, it is the change that bothers me. For example, some suggest that you can encounter new people when you move into a new community. Nevertheless, it can’t be promised that you will always have good neighbors. I will be worried about having terrible neighbors that are likely to disturb my living environment and even damage my living quality. Furthermore, some people also suggest that you can experience different weather in a different places. For example, people who used to live in a warmer place can move to a cold place to experience snow and play winter sports. Nonetheless, similarly, as a person who has lived in a warm place, I might not choose to do that since I’m not sure if I will get sick more often in a colder place. Accordingly, I prefer to stay in a place without further consideration.
To summarize, from what I’ve mentioned above, it will be better for me to live in one town or city all my life since it will be much easier for me and can make my life more comfortable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 512, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'place'?
Suggestion: place
...rience different weather in a different places. For example, people who used to live i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40855106888 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52310652612 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486935866983 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1756168762 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6956521739 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3043478261 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78260869565 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290000999142 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805995153622 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905192583751 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157696797011 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442079453281 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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