long hours few days of work, or short hours more days
It is a tricky subject when addressing what is "enjoyable" about an individual's job as there are various attitudes people have towards their career and working, in general. Some view their jobs as the road to success and a big part of their identity relies on the jobs they do. On the other hand, many people just consider their careers as a duty they have to take care of on a daily basis, to earn money and be able to attend to their real amusements, which can be anything besides work. All that said, I believe that working five days a week for shorter hours is more enjoyable and simoltaneously, more practical. I will demonstrate as foolows.
Firstly, human capacity is limited. I believe that as the work hours get longer proficiency drops and individuals are not able to concentrate. exhaustion could cause several human errors and it reduces one's ability to properly dliver what is required of them. To demostrate further, as I am a medical doctor, I have seen in my own routine of work and many of my colleagues that in the final hours of a long 36 hours shift, we are all struggling to focus and function adequately.
Secondly, long hours of work without sufficient breaks, even when they are scheduled in few days of the week, can contribute to development of mental instability and depression in individuals. The human minds needs frequently alternating cycles of work and rest. Disrupting that equilibrium may cause overexhaustion or understimulating of the brain and driving it towards depression and anxiety.
Finally, four days off in a week may seem very enjoyable at first, but I think that there is such a thing as too much rest and leisure time. In my opinion, as a person spends too much time away from their job, their enthusiasm and motivation towards their field of work might diminish as well. Let us consider a first grade teacher who spends only three days a week in the classroom comparing to a teacher who spends five days a week teaching. I believe that the latter would be more commited and emotionally attached to the children, thus being an overall more successful teacher.
In conclusion, I consider the five days of work in a week with reasonable hours the quite efficient and practical option on the basis that it improves individual's perforamnce and proficiency, gives the human brain time to rest, and provides the opportunity to be more involved and commited to one's career.
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...ity to be more involved and commited to ones career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, i think, in conclusion, in general, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82775119617 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90909877863 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533492822967 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.125496708 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.705882353 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5882352941 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23529411765 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312357751906 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902269413178 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10582645325 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176506675357 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392342225179 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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