Ambition for success is the driving force which keeps people achieving great heights. Although good luck is an essential ingredient of success, yet we can never understate the value of work ethics for achieving success. AS the speaker states that the stroke of luck surpasses the role of work ethics. But in my opinion, work ethics which includes the honesty, perseverance, truthfulness and diligence plays the inimitable role for pursuing success in the long run.
Firstly, work ethics do include the good values which we have ingrained from our ancestors forming the the ground base for our success. Working hard and with perseverance and determination heps us to stall towrads the manifested goals. If the person lacks the nnature of being true to the work which they are doing then they will be finally doomed. As we have many notable examples where hard work has paid towards success. Consider the athelete Usain Bolt, it was not just a stoke of day that made him run as quick as leopard but he had to go through many hardships and failure but there were no such obstacles which he couldn't pass through. And led him to achieve uncounted medals, rewards and recognition which conflates into success.
Secondly, even if we consider that luck does play an impetus role in driving the success. Like if we extract an excerpt from the Ramayan where the Lord Rama could not be able to rescue Mate Sita from the clutches of Ravan if the Ravan's brother was not their to help them out. So here the cohort of Rama with Vibhishan could be considered as a stroke of luck. But we can surely say that luck has a ephermal effect only and not the everlasting ones. Luck can help us to chieve success in short run but to keep that recognition and encomiun continuing, determination is required and consisitent competition which yourself and others is of utmost importance.
Luck and hard work goes hand in hand, if we don't work with valuable ethics luck will doom us too. It's only what we do in present which forms a foreground for our future. If Einstein would not have decided to study thereasons underlying the fall of an apple we would have been deprived of the prominent theories which persists today.
So as to sum up I would say that While we cant deny the role of luck in deciding the success but work ethics plays the prominent and everlasting role in the long run to usher both personally and profesionally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, as to, in short, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 423.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71394799054 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53142371177 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527186761229 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7131350776 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.947368421 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2631578947 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310957898064 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108162864669 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902271268918 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201710246659 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827465988274 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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