Every individual in the society has the responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and reject unjust laws.
Write a response in which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The statement states a sense of responsibility pertaining to the laws, lying in the hands of the individuals. Laws are the audacious weapons to evoke the society for following the correct codes of conduct. In democratic country, government engenders the laws and these are based on the inherent concept of “Of the people, by the people and for the people”. So these laws are for the betterment of the society. There are many political laws prevailing in the country like laws for dealing with the crime, laws for supporting the farmers, laws against the rape cases etc.
The statement attempts to bridge two different scenarios first to obey the just laws and other to disobey and reject the unjust laws. Looking to the introduction, its justified that the people should obey the laws which are created for the betterment of them. On the other hand, the claim to disobey the unjust laws doesn’t seems to be warranted. However, it’s undeniable that the laws applies different to people in different situations. For instance, the traffic rules holds true for the common civilians but those rules pose a threat for the ambulance and fire brigades. Hence, the traffic rules which are for ensuring the safety of the individual so that their life does come to a pause when they are not wearing a helmet and met with an unfortunate accident. At the same time, for saving the life of an individual, if the ambulance or fire brigade breaks such rules that they are not supposed to be guilty for that.
Although the laws are being carried out from the earlier ancient times when they were built but government hearkens to the demands of the people so as to bring the change in the conventions. If the people find some laws to be unjust then instead of just disobeying them and creating commotion and risk in their life. They can put forth their point of views in front of the government through various campaigns or strikes and if these seems to be just then many amendments to the age old laws would be entertained. Like there was a single child law in china to regulate the population expansion which but was later changed by their government looking to the drastic earthquakes which was faced by the country. Similarly, in the early times, the parental property was bequeathed to their son but later this laws was amended so to ensure the egalitarian concept of division of property equally among the sons and daughters. So even if the laws seems to be unjust the government takes appropriate measure to satisfy its people.
Laws inculcates a sense of security and peacefulness in the society. We can never imagine a society in which those miscreants who rape the innocent girls are left unattended or undealt with. This will surely act as a detriment for the society and will not make it a dreadful place to live. Hence, laws are very important element when people of different cultures, values and ethics lives together.
Hence we can conclude that, each and every individual has the duty to follow the laws and consider them as their responsibility for the welfare of the country. They should also raise their voices against unjust laws and if it seems feasible and justifies for a change government should take the appropriate actions for the same. In this way laws will be praised for their existence and will minimally disobeyed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...t hearkens to the demands of the people so as to bring the change in the conventions. If...
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...y was bequeathed to their son but later this laws was amended so to ensure the egali...
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Line 3, column 921, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[5]
Message: “So even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y equally among the sons and daughters. So even if the laws seems to be unjust the government takes appropriate measure to satisfy its people. Laws inculcates a sense of security an...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ures, values and ethics lives together. Hence we can conclude that, each and eve...
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Suggestion: Hence,
... values and ethics lives together. Hence we can conclude that, each and every in...
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Line 5, column 402, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'disobey'
Suggestion: disobey
... for their existence and will minimally disobeyed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, similarly, so, then, as to, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2780.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 575.0 442.535393258 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8347826087 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89685180668 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61361854339 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464347826087 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 860.4 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7401450629 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.2 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.12 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209570888389 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068415789768 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478559579365 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120529299504 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189461847626 0.0667264976115 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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