Competition is burgeoning at a rocket speed and with this each nation is advancing in each and every field possible. Talking about languages, earlier there were few languages known to people but now there are plenty of languages learned by each individual. Some people prefer to learn a foreign language in their own country while others prefer to learn a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken. In my view point, I prefer to learn a foreign language in my own country rather than going and learning a language in the country in which it is spoken.
There are many advantages of learning a language in own country. One advantages is that , as a person is learning in his/her own country, he can receive help and guidance from many people as he will be familiar with many people in his/her country. For example, when I was a child and wanted to learn a new language, I was guided by my professor at school, then my parents supported me and many of my friends helped me by communicating in the same language which i wanted to learn, this increased the communication skill in that language and eventually I was able to learn the language.
Learning a language in own country would save a lot of a person's time and money. For example, a person can hire a professor would come at his/her house to teach, thus saving a lot of time for travelling. If a person is learning a foreign language by going to that country, it would be more costly for example the cost for travelling through air plane, the cost of living there, food and many more.Hence learning a foreign language in own country is more feasible according to me.
While some prefers to travel to foreign location to learn the language of their country, but if a individual doesn't even know the language of that country how would he communicate with the people of that country. It will be difficult for him to survive there. It is also possible that a person is not able to adjust in the environment of that country, the climate may be too cold or too hot and also the food may not be suitable for him/her. Hence there are many difficulties which a person might have to face if he chooses to travel to foreign location to learn the language.
In conclusion, It is more feasible to learn a foreign language in one's own country as it cost-effective and time saving. Learning a foreign language in the country in which it is spoken leads to many difficulties like the cost of living there and the choice of food available. Thus, In my opinion i would prefer to learn a foreign language in my own country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, talking about, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53862660944 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62533228924 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.375536480687 0.524837075471 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9271546145 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.411764706 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4117647059 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.525240388354 0.236089414692 222% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216429523285 0.076458572812 283% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143706145805 0.0737576698707 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332021319976 0.150856017488 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103197323859 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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