Many people think that weather influences people's moods and behavior. How does weather influence you in your daily life?
Use specific details to explain your answer.
Since ancient times, the weather has always been the most essential part of human society. Although our technology has advanced dramatically, we still can't control the weather, and the weather continues to influence our everyday life.
Living in the tropical zone, I am surrounded by hot and humid weather most of the year, especially during summer. This time is my most disliked period of the year since the extremely high temperature and the air full of moisture will make me feel quite uncomfortable. When summer sets in, the temperature will rise to a startling 35 degrees Celsius. Under this scorching atmosphere, even standing under a tree will make one sweat a lot. As a consequence, I tend to become lazy and sleepy during summer vacation. I have no desire to move and do some meaningful work. All I want to do is stay in my bedroom and turn on the air conditioner.
Contrary to hot weather, I love rainy days. These are the times when the sky is covered by a thick layer of clouds. All you can see are tiny drops of water landing everywhere like they are dancing to the music of nature. Some people may find rainy days depressing, but, in my opinion, this scenery is poetic, beautiful, and relaxing. Moreover, I love to watch the rain through my bedroom. Because there is a vast green land outside my room window, and there will be no one walking on it during rainy days, I can imagine myself being in the wild.
However, when the typhoon comes, the rainy days become horrible and scary, but not poetic. During typhoon days, the wind gets furious, and the rain is accompanied by thunder and lightning. I can hear the wind roaring outside, and I am scared that the fierce wind will break my window. Nevertheless, there are also some benefits to a typhoon day. For example, I can take a day off school when the wind is too strong or the rain is too big. Furthermore, typhoons often occur during the summer months, and their coming can make the unbearably hot weather cool down a little.
Without a doubt, the weather is of paramount importance in our life. It can have a significant effect on our moods and behaviors, and people living in different regions will have different concepts for weather due to distinct weather conditions. I believe that unless we can gain control over nature, we will be influenced profoundly by the weather.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69323671498 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5911435374 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1906166059 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9583333333 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29166666667 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133094481198 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354370388243 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508244094046 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901752743443 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761086349334 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.