Many people welcome the opening of shopping areas near their homes.  On the other hand, some people are strongly opposed to the construction of such facilities.  If the opening of a large shopping center in your neighborhood were announced, would you su

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Many people welcome the opening of shopping areas near their homes.  On the other hand, some people are strongly opposed to the construction of such facilities.  If the opening of a large shopping center in your neighborhood were announced, would you support or oppose its construction? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Construction of a shopping mall affects people and local businesses. Therefore it is crucial to know all aspects. Both adherents and opponents have substantial reasons to defend their ideas. I personally believe that having such a mall is beneficial for local people. In what follows, I will elaborate on my viewpoint and provide details to illustrate my perspective.

First and foremost, many people oppose the construction of these large malls, since it would have negative effects on small local businesses. In contrast, I am of the opinion that these large shopping centers have a mostly positive effect on overall employment since these malls employ hundreds of peoples and provide them with more jobs available. My father's experience is a compelling example of this. My family home town is a small city with little job opportunities, where most of the young people were unemployed. After the construction of a shopping mall, there were many jobs available for young people, and as a result, the rate of unemployed people dropped after that. This example demonstrates how large malls can elevate the economic situation and improve local people's lives.

Furthermore, It is almost axiomatic that large shopping centers are economical. This is because they are better able to manage their store and sales. For instance, there is one large shopping center in my neighborhood that has products on sale and affordable offers for students regularly. I shop there and save lots of money because of the offers, which would be beneficial for me in the long run.

Another equally important reason is that they have a wide variety of products, and services such as parking lots and carwash. Most of these shopping centers have food courts and cafes, where people can stay and in the middle of their shopping. Take a personal experience as an example; I enjoy my time in a large shopping center's food court near our university. It is a convenient place to stay and spend time because it provides people with a variety of food options and services.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that the opening of shopping areas is profitable for local people. This is because shopping malls provide local people with more jobs, and because it is more economical than small shops, and because it has different services. It is anticipated that authorities construct more malls to support people and improve their lives.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08080808081 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73168367578 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492424242424 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2521007228 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4545454545 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294241723316 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881045793439 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626870607516 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161769532399 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375769582455 0.0645574589148 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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