In many places, students must arrive very early in the morning to attend school. Some people believe that starting the school day early is the best approach to support learning, but others believe that starting the school day at a later time in the morning would be better for students. Which view do you agree with and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with this belief that says starting the school day early is the best approach to support learning. Some people might say, starting the school day at a later time in the morning would be better for students, but I think there are some issues with that belief. I have mentioned some of the explanations and some of my experiments below to defend my idea.
In my perspective, and as I have studied some scientific articles, I have learned that any time in a day must be used for an ascertain purpose. For example, Sleeping at a determined time will help the immune system of the human body for doing its job useful and effective. My point of explaining this concept is, Starting the school early in the morning to attend school will make students go to their beds as soon as possible at night, so their bodies have enough time to recover their body system, and they will be healthy and will have a healthy life. In another hand, the students' parents will go to the bed early to be ready for their works in the morning.
To complete my explanation, If Students have to go to bed in an ascertain time, and wake up early in the morning, they will learn to schedule their plans. They will learn that they must do their works at a specific time, so they will have plans for any minutes of their time.
Finally, I think the weather in the morning is very fresh and nice, this condition will create a feeling of happiness in the morning and will improve the health condition of the students. I have experienced that condition, and I could learn my lessons better early in the morning.
To sum up, As I mentioned above, starting school early in the morning has many advantages for now and the future of students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, for example, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45859872611 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40030222447 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452229299363 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1943445243 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323407675521 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138669765542 0.076458572812 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103208935462 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204481698316 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100268965552 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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