Since the dawn of civilization, transportation played vital role in each society. Nowadays, many are adamant that should be taken into consideration its destructive and constructive facets of this manner. Due to its paramount importance, huge steps have taken to elevate it. Some people may hold the view that contemproray transportation such as shipping and electricity vechile make the world better place. However, some others take opposite side and believe that it is fallacy. From my vantage point, I consider that ther former one generally carries more weight. In what follows I will delve into most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned to say that is about economic reasons which became significant day by day. Due to advance in the world trade, companies look for a way to cut their cost such as transportation and find the way get rid of its expenses. Nowadays, transportation vechiles which consume oil replace with the one which working with electricity since using them is costly. Consequently, there will be big shift in the near future. A vivid exam which can be given to shed light on the subject is Tesla which producted vechiles do not emit non-carbon di oxide. They sold millions cars since its paramount importance for the nature.
In the approaching this issue, apart from what mentioned above, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind. In today, governments are trying to encourage people to use nature friend transportation such as bicycles, electricity motocycles and others. They set up some measures such as seting up new taxes, studying as a class in the schools and advertising on the tv and radio programs. Especially taxes are higly helpful. This is, people are sensible them when they take up a decision. Finally, Countries measures make modern transportation much more attractive.
Although, a forementioned reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at first glance, there are by no means the only reasons available. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics reveal by a recent research conducted in our country showed that people are eager to ride bicycles since it is free and heal some illness such asboody sugar and easing tension. The research study has conducted between young people from the different racial groups in the ten city in the country. The result shows that the young will not drive car if it is not necessary. Furthermore, they found cars dangerous and jepodarsize their future.
to wrap up, according to the what was mentioned in the body paragraphs above, one can not deny this era belongs modern transporations and people do not want to use old one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2234.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08883826879 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85719129834 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585421412301 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7632739626 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.36 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.56 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11372445763 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286535665481 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654402993917 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0579509210906 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457205331607 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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