The more money people have can more they should give away to charity
Poor people often have difficulties to survive because they do not have enough money. They really need others' help. Some people say that the more money people have, the more they should give away to charity. In my opinion, I totally agree with this statement.
To begin with, if rich people give some of their money to the charity, it can improve poor people's life. Nowadays, the range of rich and poor people in many countries are extremely wide. Some people can own several houses and cars, while others are having problem on finding foods. It goes without saying, no one want to live under a poor condition. Everyone wants to have a better quality of life. As a result, when rich people give some money to them, they can use it to eat, rent house, or even have the chance to find a better environment to earn their own money. Besides, rich people often have tons of money, giving them some of it is just a piece of cake. Thus, by giving money to charity to help poor people can they have a better quality of life.
In addition, poor people can have a better future if rich people give some money to charity. To be more specific, poor people often do not have the chance to attend school. Therefore, since they did not attend school, they cannot receive knowledge and earn more money. As a result, when these people are poor, their next generation will also be poor. However, if rich people give them some money to attend school, they can have the chance to become educated and even find a better place to work. When they start earning money, their kids will also have the chance to attend school. As time pass, they will not be poor anymore. Thus, I think it is always important for people to go to school, so they can have the chance to learn knowledge and find a higher paid job. Therefore, rich people should really give the charity some money, because it will lead the poor people to a better future.
Undoubtedly, some people may disagree with this statement, because they think people should always work hard to earn their own money. If we give money to them, they will not have the chance to improve. However, if people do not even have the money to eat, how can they have the energy to go out to work? Therefore, I think rich people should really give some of their money to charity.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, thus, while, i think, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47268408551 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04923845555 2.67179642975 77% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.387173396675 0.524837075471 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 14.0 3.51792114695 398% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.773850884 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.32 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.84 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.518398034339 0.236089414692 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187819514124 0.076458572812 246% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13981178769 0.0737576698707 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.400201923407 0.150856017488 265% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749008278727 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.97 8.01818996416 74% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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