In my belief, it is totally true and recommendable that who has more money should spend more on charity. I am willing to discuss it by proposing these reasons. First, helping others gives the person a satisfaction that is beyond the description. second, this donation prevents the rich ones to squander their money.
To support my first reason I want to ask one question. what is the point of earning money? is it nothing but to satisfy our needs in the best possible ways, such as our needs for food, vacation, and the most important one, our need to have a calm life. Having inner peace has been one of the most important ones of our wishes and helps others who are in need is a good way to satisfy this wish. when thinking about the happiness in the face of a child who's sickness can be treated with the money you donated to charity, your heart starts to melt from joy. This tiniest example of help properly shows why who can help must help.
Today we repeatedly can witness lots of food go waste in fancy restaurants while in the other parts of the city some kids are searching for one piece of bread among the trashes. What if we had some balanced in this problem? this balance can achieve just by donation. Money that the rich ones donate can be helpful to them in needs in so many ways such as preparing a proper shelter, healthy food or medical cares instead of wasting in gambling for example. This is a true example of two birds with one stone.
in conclusion, I recommend to those who have serious money to give away as much s money they can to charity both for themselves happiness and satisfaction and a better life for people in need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43606557377 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3350478082 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596721311475 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2081788977 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5625 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189525427293 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561222372221 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938409345154 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147758660676 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117273523958 0.0645574589148 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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