Most of the parents are not convinced with the way that teacher teach their children and never speak with them to address this issue agree or disagree
Education has an enormous leverage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and in an intangible ways. It is utterly important to appreciate the efforts of the teachers because of their eagerness to provide high level of learning to the new generations and their indelible impact on out society. Although some people hold the view point that the methods used by teacher to provide learning to our children are not satisfactory. However, others hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. In my perception which led me to agree with the idea that teachers use the most persuasive ways to produce his material and at the same time it is acceptable by all parents. In the following essay I shall delve into the most outstanding reasons.
To begin with, the government hires educational experts to follow and supervise the ways of teaching in schools. Those experts notice the methods that the teacher use to conduct the information in an understandable way and repeat it over and over if needed. Furthermore, she should keep the students who needs special attention in a certain circle and provide them with extra informative materials. The way that she keens to use all her energy to satisfy the teaching method. For instance, my own son is a good example of this, He has a bad hand writing and most of his writing are un understandable. The teacher takes 15 minutes from other activities. She extract these minutes for recess, library, and musuc classes, each 5 minutes to help him enhance his writing. She and the supervisor expert keeps follow his achievement every day till he reach his goals. Apparently, it must be taken into account that this time the teacher and the supervisor are giving from their own comfortable and spare time to help and develop my son’s writing. Hats up for them.
In addition, the education level are increased dramatically in the resent years in contrast to other previous years. The kids prospection are widened and the schools rate are at highest levels. For instance, according to the last statistics results to evaluate the development of education levels in prince county public schools where I live.I thave been found that, the teaching methods, equipments used, and the teachers ideology in learning. All are increased in the 2000s.Moreover, the last survey that measure how the parents are satisfied with the teaching methods are impressive.
To sum up, taking all reasons into account I reinforce my idea that teaching are most convinced one and effective method in our decade.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00234192037 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76757920389 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555035128806 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3418725946 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0909090909 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4090909091 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264689483863 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648762549833 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551986779269 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140464853962 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555442308449 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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