Movies and television have more negative effects than positive.
People have different view on the way movies ans television affect young people guise. While some claim that media have provided a great opportunity and comfort for new generations, I, personally, believe that the adverse effects of movies and television outweigh their positive impacts because they promote lassitude, violence, and destructive sexual behaviours.
There are a lot of reasons why films and television programs encourage laziness. Consider that when you wake up there are a bunch of special morning programs e.g. "Good Morning America", "Sun Is Rising", "Morning and Families", and so on. Later in the morning, a train of different medical programs begin. next in the afternoon, they broadcast sports programs. Finally at night, they start reality shows, series, dramas, and movies. Ignoring all the 24-hour news channel which cover the inane details of what occurs all over the world. If somebody was used to follow tv programs or movies, he will not have any time to do beneficial works such as reading books, socializing, doing sports. This trend, inevitably, after a while, will conclude in lassitude. Young people who overuse television and movies transform to indolent adults which may be make problems for their societies.
Moreover, many movies and television trigger violence among young people. The main reason is that humans as animals have been evolved from monkeys, thereby learning a lot of behaviours exactly through imitating. For example, it is well-documented that humans child learn to speak mostly through imitate his parents. Similarly, by watching movies in action or criminal genres, the youth, naturally, tend to emulate the actors behaviour. As a result, they get more and more violent. To be more specific, recently, I saw, my neighbour's little boy beating up his sister. First, I thought that it is rare, but next, when speaking to his parents, I found that he is in love of action movies, and he has got in trouble in th school, too. This is why I think that movies and television have made young people angry and violent which has a lot of negative consequences for the society.
The most persuasive reason, in my opinion, is that movies and television adversely affect sexual behaviours of young people. It is undeniable that producers of these media utilize sexual appeal to attract more and more people to the cinemas or in front of TVs. As far as commercial aspects are concerned, there is no point to reprehend them, but we should take into account the negative impacts that such movies have on the way, young people behave. For instance, may be some young people become familiar with sexual contents that are not appropriate for his age. In that case, that young man’s life can be, drastically, harmed. He might experience mental problems, relationship issues, and even may commit high-risk sexual behaviours which yield to serious diseases. For example, a couple of years ago, I heard in the news that a 13-year-old boy got father. This was surprising to me. In the time he was asked about what perverted him to such behaviour, enunciated that he was,first, became familiar with sexual behaviours in a movie that he liked so much. Therefore, showing sexually explicit scenes in movies and television causes serious problems for young people both mental and physical health.
In conclusion, as movies and television can yield to indifferent, brutal, and sexually inappropriate behaviours in young people, personally, I think that their disadvantages are much more than their advantages. Considering all these points, not only is this the obligation of governments to expurgate the contents showed in cinema and television, but also parents are responsible to their children and the future society to monitor the movies and television programs thair children watch.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3235.0 1977.66487455 164% => OK
No of words: 619.0 407.700716846 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22617124394 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98795655647 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81751141159 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 334.0 212.727598566 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53957996769 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 987.3 618.680645161 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8595734313 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.833333333 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6333333333 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257326103197 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612845631633 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678690597223 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155488800364 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566254836271 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 168.0 86.8835125448 193% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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