Movies and television strongly influence the way people behave. Do you agree or disagree? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
With the development of technology, the entertainment industry is more flourishing than before, more people watch TV shows or go to a cinema during their leisure time. I am the opinion of more people like to learn the behaviors or the ways of talking from the characters and hosts. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, people would like to imitate people who are considered cool especially famous people on TV shows. Since they believe that it is a trend, others may think they are cool if they do the same things. My personal experience is a compelling illustration. When I was in junior high school, many of my peers made a movement after talking. They were raising both hands in the same direction and putting the heads down, and they were trying to do the exactly same action the popular talk show host did. Besides this, those people even mocked someone who did not do it or thought it was stupid. Therefore, indeed, television impacts people’s ideas and behaviors, especially teenagers’.
Moreover, audiences may consider that the plots shown in movies are real. Some stories of movies are touched and full of emotions, and a fabulous movie may make audiences want to believe it is true and hope it will happen in reality. Take romance movies, for instance. Some girlfriends started asking their partners to do something romantic for them as movies had shown, and those boyfriends may try to learn how to satisfy their princess from the plots of movies, such as giving a surprise with flowers, spending lots of money for a French restaurant, sending jewelry, and nowadays even giving an iPhone. Thus, people actually were affected by movies that they learned what they watched and used some strategies in reality.
In conclusion, I strongly insist that modern people are definitely influenced by movies, series, TV shows, and the like. This is because people regard celebrities on TV programs or movies as a trend indicator. Additionally, the stories and plots sometimes are so attractive that people believe they are real.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94632768362 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64269877398 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579096045198 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6568976411 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2777777778 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159206056328 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050146971113 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341774441215 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959023164632 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217373119517 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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