Movies and televisions should always show audience that good people are rewarded and bad people are punished.
The pros and cons of movies and televisions have become controversial since their advent. The majority of people, especially for parents whose children are indulged in them, consider them as gorgeous yet toxic cuisines, advocating strict restrictions over them. Whereas, from my standpoint, I contend that the benefits of movies and televisions outweigh their drawbacks.
we are inclined to blame movies or televisions for distract people from their work. When it comes to children, they are even considered as culprit of the deterioration of the next generation. Needless to say, there are indeed not few people who are obsessed with movies and televisions. whereas, it is an exaggeration to attribute all the negative outcomes to them. What really plays a determined role is self-control rather than external environment. Besides, even if movies and televisions were absent, just as the time before the electronic era, people would still find other form of recreations and those who have poor self-control would be indulged in them as well.
Moreover, movies and televisions are a benchmark of the development of society, facilitating the circulation of information as well as ideas around the world. without televisions, the information could only have been disseminated through newspapers and magazines, which are comparatively slower than the televisions. In that sense, it is arduous for us to get access to the outside world. instead, we are confined in our localized areas. By televisions and movies, our vision can be enlarged and we can experience different culture without leaving our homes. they provides each and every of us a relatively convenient path to knowledge.
By facilitating information circulation, movies and television are indeed helping unit the world together. For the past people, the world was just like isolated islands scattering around the vast empty sea. culture and events in different parts of the world are largely irrelevant. The isolation cause innovation and creations across the world cannot be shared immediately, leading to a significant imbalance in the development of different part of the world. Thus, elevations can help curtail the difference of the world. Mainstreams are formed and majority appears. Perhaps the variety of the world is diminished, yet less variance means less contradiction. So by imparting a united value, like democracy, human rights, the world can be more harmonious place.
Above all the arguments, the advantages of movies and televisions are prominent and disadvantages are in an acceptable range. In conclusion, we should not boycott the spreading of televisions and movies. instead, we should dig treasure in them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, really, so, still, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43436754177 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09105793027 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556085918854 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6251724389 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5769230769 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1153846154 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57692307692 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153949659933 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426331016092 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567894579614 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923229555385 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569137054732 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.