Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor?
Neighbours play an important role in every one's life. Because they live very close to you and their behaviour always affect you, whether you like it or not. Different people have different views about what the qualities of a good neighbour is. I think there are many qualities for a good neighbour but if I want to mention two of the most important of them, I would state kindness and being respective to your rights.
First, I think a good neighbour should be kind. Because you are living in the same neighbourhood with your neighbours and if a problem occurs to any one they should be the first to realize it and try to help the harmed one. Actually I think living in a place that every one cares for others is very great and better for any one. For example I remember that one of my neighbours' mother was stroke by a heart attack and his car had a problem that he could not use it. He called me and asked for my help and I took his mother to hospital and the doctor that if we had come a bit later, she could have even died. My neighbour was very happy for his mother and thanked me for my help and I told him that we are living in a world that everyone needs other's help, so we should be kind to each other. After that we have become close friend and he has been very helpful to me.
Second, I think a good neighbour should be aware of other neighbours rights and respect them. This is very crucial if you live in an apartment. Having a neighbour that is not logical and doesn't care about other's rights is horrible. I remember when I lived in my previous apartment I had a noisy neighbour that always caused trouble for me. He always had big parties at midnights and when I asked him to be more quiet in nights, at least the nights that were not in the weekend and I had to go to work by the mornings, he simply told me that it was none of my business. As a result I was always sleepy at the work and I couldn't do my job well. The worst thing happened when of my friends came from U.S. He had been in a long journey and really needed to rest, but because of that neighbour he couldn't and he finally left my home. That was so embarrassing.
In sum, I think a good neighbour should be kind and respect other neighbours. I suggest when you want to buy a new home, first be a little familiar with those who live there because they can affect you both negatively and positively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, if, really, second, so, well, at least, for example, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 84.0 43.0788530466 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18221258134 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28613235742 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455531453362 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5082590527 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8095238095 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9523809524 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0871983155272 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337054111421 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422756641627 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727064404498 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467186194983 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.53 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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