Now children do not behavior as well as the children did in the past. Which one of the following measure do you think can help children(age5-10) behave better?
A. Control the time they spend on TV or movie
B. Take more time to chat with children
C. Monitor the interaction between children and their peers.
Modern society changes children’s behavior dramatically. While some people talk over that it will be a spectacular alternative to control the time they consume on TV or movie, others think that parents should monitor the connection between children and their friends. It is so controvertible for people to decide on a specific solution. In my view, the most effective way that children improve the attitude is to limit the time they watch TV or movie. They acquire a mountain of time to study some school materials, progress the communication with the family, and gain a healthy body for future life.
To begin with, decreasing the time to watch TV or movie causes young people more opportunities to focus on study. Young people often lost the time they spend in the house to watch some videos. Moreover, these technologies disturb the concentration on facing their table to study homework. It makes them decline average interest in academic subjects. Once parents limit the time for their children to spend time watching some videos, these remained time utilize for study.
Secondly, young people will talk with parents more actively if parents confine the time children devote to TV or movie. Nowadays, the more improved technology enhances the attention young people like, the more children want to stay in their room. Consequently, it creates friction between young people and their parents. However, the dilemma gradually ceases to take any action as the time limitation about TV or movies. Thus, they do not care about their relationship.
Finally, the control that forces young people to watch TV or movie less infrequently makes them more healthy. When people watch videos in the house, they often continue watching them by unconsciousness. Therefore, they sometimes stay home all day at the weekend, and it does not work well for their health. For example, they will gain weight, feel exhausted after short walks, and sleep well because of the lack of tiredness. Hence, young people should be limited to watch TV or movie.
To sum up, the best method to improve children’s behavior would be that parents control the time for children to watch TV or movies. I certainly believe that it brings about plenty of time to focus on study, talk with family, and care about their health.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in my view, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06315789474 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61565709715 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492105263158 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7618384722 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4545454545 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289405948936 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093268114507 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765966847652 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190928423913 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617380620538 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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