Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved theway people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the
way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, food has really become easier to prepare. this had an impact on people's lives in various ways. In some aspects it is much more convenient because you need less time to cook your meal, but that's not all there is. I think that with the new trends and with the improvement of science we today have a lot more geneticaly modified products. that being said humans are now more and more exposed to the unhealthy lifestyles. The sale of fast food is continuously increasing and the reason is the fast way of living. Everyone is in the rush, and noone has time to prepare a good, healthy, fresh meal for themselves. they all try to find a quicker approach, and to get the job done in no time. Fortunately, there is a lot more famous chefs and influencers that are now promoting the proper way of feeding. Using homemade dishes and freshly taken ingredients, trying to explain people that you can eat fast, healthy and tasty without being "indangered" by junk food. trends are changing and we now have a lot of youth that is acknowledging this way of living.In future I think we have a great danger of coming to the point where the majority of our food will be geneticaly modified so we have to raise the awereness. there is a saying, which I think is appropriate for this topic which goes.. "The health comes through your mouth" and people need to better understand the improtance of their health in their lives. And they need to know that they are what they eat, so they have to start eating fresh and homemade.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59636363636 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68931156511 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570909090909 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3535764682 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2857142857 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.45110844103 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162892430867 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608051881882 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877785362213 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162892430867 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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