Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the
way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Food is one of the basic element to lead the life. Without food, we cannot imagine our lives or other activities. As the days evolved from stone age to the present, I believe that the way of preparation of the food have become easier and has influenced the people a lot. It definitely has changed the way of peoples' life. This is because of two reasons. One is it has changed the people's lives due to advent of newer and better technology. The second reason is the easy availability of the groceries. I believe that these two reasons has changed the people's lives and the examples for these reasons will be corroborated in the following paragraphs.
Technology has grown and is growing from grass root to galaxies and each day new electronic equipment is made avail to everyone. When it comes to the kitchen matter, many new equipment has been introduced. They include micro wave ovens, toast makers, electric stoves and many others. I have seen my grand mother heating again and again, the food prepared in the winter season, using fire wood, so that we can have hot food. It use to take thirty minutes for the food to get heated. But today, with the help of micro wave ovens, within thirty seconds the food is heated. This has helped us to manage time brilliantly. Not only micro wave ovens, the toasters, bread makers have been helping to manage our time very effectively.
The advent of technology has also made the groceries available very easily. Today with the help of cellphones, we have facilities to install the applications those which help in ordering the groceries online easily and quickly. I have two application installed in my cellphone. One is that application, where I can buy the groceries. The groceries are delivered to the door step within minutes. The another application is an application where I can order readily prepared food online. The food is also delivered to the doorstep. This comfort has made the people's life easier, efficacious and manageable.
Thus, I conclude the essay supporting the claim that the preparation of the food nowadays has become easier and has changed the lives of the people greatly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun equipment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much new equipment', 'a good deal of new equipment'.
Suggestion: much new equipment; a good deal of new equipment
...e. When it comes to the kitchen matter, many new equipment has been introduced. They include micro...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...g again and again, the food prepared in the winter season, using fire wood, so that we can have h...
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Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'uses'?
Suggestion: uses
... wood, so that we can have hot food. It use to take thirty minutes for the food to ...
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Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... wood, so that we can have hot food. It use to take thirty minutes for the food to ...
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Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...can order readily prepared food online. The food is also delivered to the doorstep....
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Line 5, column 556, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...the doorstep. This comfort has made the peoples life easier, efficacious and manageable...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84782608696 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60221114354 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505434782609 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6596223468 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.36 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.72 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.24 5.45110844103 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24641243738 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653386251983 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071148108672 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177573880269 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110212559157 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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