Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
family: "Open Sans", sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(67, 74, 84); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> it is easier to prepare food today than ever before in history. I strongly believe that changes in food preparation methods have had a positive effect on people’s lives. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
family: "Open Sans", sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(67, 74, 84); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> To begin with, changes in the way we cook food have increased the opportunities that women have to work outside of the home. In the past, married women were expected to be homemakers who managed their household and prepared two or three meals a day for their family. while women still struggle with this burden, recent improvements in how food is prepared make it easier for them to balance having a career with their family obligations. my older sister is a great example of this. every day she prepares two meals a day for her family of five while also working as a business executive at a major corporation. Her work takes up an inordinate amount of her time, so she takes advantage of her microwave and of pre-prepared foods to very quickly put food on the table at mealtimes. I often compare her to our mother, who did not have access to either a microwave or to instant foods. she had to spend hours in the kitchen every day and as a result she was not able to follow her dreams of finding employment in the business world.
family: "Open Sans", sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(67, 74, 84); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> Secondly, changes in the way food is prepared have had positive health effects on society. In the past, quickly prepared food was mostly unhealthy. it consisted mainly of frozen “TV Dinners” which were high in fat and calories and low in vitamins and nutrients. now, however, we can use modern technology to prepare meals that are both fast and nutritious. microwaves are not used only to heat up prepared foods, but to create real dishes that use whole ingredients. People everywhere can now pick up a variety of healthy vegetables at their supermarket and use the Internet to find a microwave recipe that will quickly turn them into a delicious treat. this is precisely what my sister often does; her children mostly eat microwaved meals, but they are strong and healthy youngsters.
family: "Open Sans", sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(67, 74, 84); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> In conclusion, I strongly believe that changes to the way we prepare our meals have had a positive effect on the way we live our lives. this is because they have made it easier for women to work outside of the home, and because they make it possible for us to consume meals that are both quick and healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2462.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12916666667 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11407813629 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470833333333 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 741.6 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5353391562 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.1 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125066473512 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470608906239 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352195955913 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937226210546 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108019714036 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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