Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
We can not imagine our life without food, because it is a part of our biological process. In this modern world we can find lots of variety of different food in supermarkets and small shops. Personally, I believe that nowadays it is easier to prepare, or to buy food than before, and that changed our life tremendously. I think so because of two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, prepared food has a huge effect on a women’s life. They don’t have to spent hours in the kitchen like in past to prepare meal for a whole family. Moreover, with the help of the microwave, this tough process, became even easier for them. My sister is a compelling example of this. She has a big family and as a businesswoman she has to spend most of her time on her major job. Every day when she comes back she feeds all her big family with a prepared food, as a result she saves time and can spend more time on her favorite job. Isn’t it nice?
Secondly, we have a big network of fast food restaurants nowadays with a wonderful drive through system. We don’t even need to get out of the car, everything is so convenient. For example, if you want to try fresh and juicy hamburger just get to the nearest “Jack in the Box” and buy it there. When I was young I was very tall and thin, thus I had an inferiority complex. No matter what I have done nothing helped to gain weight. I tried different methods, from drinking a beer with sour cream to eating just sweets for a month. Everything was useless. Once I saw this colorful billboard with a hamburger on it and I decided to taste it. It was the first time when I felt happy, furthermore my weight began to grow. After only a couple of month, of eating this amazing food, I weighted more than two hundreds pounds. Finally I was so pleased with my weight and felt happy.
In conclusion, I am the opinion that prepared food has changed our life to good, because we don’t need to spend much time preparing it and we can control our weight with it.
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The most difficult thing for me is to write in 30 minutes. Sometimes it is so tough to concentrate or to find a specific topic in your head. Writing, especially an essay part, is the hardest part.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...rowave, this tough process, became even more easier for them. My sister is a compelling exa...
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Line 2, column 357, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...a big family and as a businesswoman she have to spend most of her time on her major ...
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Line 3, column 743, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun month seems to be countable; consider using: 'a couple of months'.
Suggestion: a couple of months
...ore my weight began to grow. After only a couple of month, of eating this amazing food, I weighte...
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Line 3, column 833, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...weighted more than two hundreds pounds. Finally I was so pleased with my weight and fel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40157480315 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52951930375 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524934383202 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4862146068 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9130434783 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5652173913 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78260869565 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0936097457528 0.236089414692 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299916422662 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407113538261 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636961124748 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304835224717 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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