Nowadays, many movies or films are based on books. Some people prefer to read the original book before they watch the movie, other prefer to watch the movie before reading the book. Which one do you prefer
A century ago books were a primary source of entertainment. However, with the emergence of the cinema and facilitating of movie production, people change their taste and lean toward watching movies. In the competition between books and movies, some of the producers produce movies based on the novels. Accordingly, people who like both are in a dilemma whether they should watch movies before reading the book or vice versa. I adamantly prefer to read the novel first. I feel this way because of three main reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, author of a novel allocates a considerable amount of time to convey his imagination through words. For a simple perspective same as viewing a valley, as an example, a novel-lover should turn various pages to grasp the perspective. On the contrary, it is possible that the view just takes a second an audience in the cinema. By watching the movie first, you completely ruin the imagination that is going to be built through pages of the book. Furthermore, you would not motivated enough to read the novel after.
Secondly, watch the movie first means spoiling the book for yourself. when a friend comes to us and says that I watch the last episode of game of thrones, we usually cover our ears since our subconscious is signaling to the brain that he is going to eliminate pleasure of watching next episode. Accordingly, how could a one spoil a book for himself? It should be stressed that a group of people believes by reading a book, your are going to spoil the story of a movie too. However, I think that since watching a movie takes less time than reading a book, these to distinctive situations are not comparable.
Last but not least, people cannot place a confidant in the director of a movie which was inspired by a novel. The main goal of a producer is to maximize his profit. Accordingly, There are numerous examples of the movies that change many events of the book to catch the attention of the public. At the end of Norwegian Wood, written by the well-known Japanese writer, the main character of the novel suicides because of departure from his fiance. However, he marries her in the movie surprisingly. When a journalist asked a director what in the world convinced him to do this, he said that I thought the viewer would like it more.
in a nutshell, I prefer to read a novel before watching the related movie. I feel this way because of building imagination, distrustfulness of directors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, i think, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75288683603 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76374820015 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524249422633 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7736809174 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.75 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0416666667 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45833333333 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387933503811 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102442693896 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987912013682 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208036650268 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932631721388 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.