In the modern world, the image is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word.
Do you agree or disagree?
The emergence of the internet and technologies have a wide range of effects on different facets of the society. One of these impacts is the way people communicate with each other. Although they still can send text and written words to each other, I firmly believe that this way of communication is going to obsolete in the future since they can send images to each other. I believe in this way because of two main reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
first and foremost, pictures are the most convenient way of communicating. For writing down a note people should have considerable experience to convey their meanings. All the students in the primary schools are obliged to write essays to empower this ability. Nevertheless, the majority of us did not gain enough capability to write down our thoughts. With the advent of smartphones, everything has changed since people can simply take the photo of their surroundings and send it in a blink of an eye. it does not need to put any effort, just press a button on your smartphone. it should be mentioned that popularity of the Instagram which is a social media for sharing the photos is because of this convenience. Users not only can share their pictures easily, but also the can realize feeling and location of their followers included their family and friends.
secondly, pictures contain more detail and information than a text. Ubiquitously, Most of the reasons for communicating are based on one thing and it is to assure others like families or friends that you are healthy and in a good situation. Accordingly, An smile in the picture definitely is equivalent to the two paragraphs of a written letter or text. Furthermore, pictures play a vital role in the news since they can spread feeling and contents simultaneously. It should be stressed that various governments try to misuse the ability and propagate their belief to the society by providing pictures that cannot explain the main reason for an event.
In a nutshell, I agree with the idea that the way of communication are experiencing major change and people tend to send a picture to each other rather than written words. I believe this way because it is easier and it has more details and information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85117493473 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82841266336 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524804177546 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3723665127 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7894736842 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1578947368 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68421052632 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139655083261 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422517567045 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529993491513 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105954713054 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716175912836 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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