nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company why might this be the case what could be disadvantages of being self employed
After the industrial revolution, many farmers and peasant herds immigrated to modern cities with new factories and companies to find a job. Since then, many debates have been appeared between philosophers and socialists about workers and working. While the head of the capitalist's theoreticians, John Stuart Mill, agrees with the notion of working in the factories, Karl Marx, founder of communism ideology, states that being self-employed is a better choice. In my view, I agree with Marx for two critical reasons.
Firstly, due to the Marx's idea, a process named alienation occurs between a company's laborers. It means they become alienated from their inner desires and virtual drives; therefore, it affects their mental and physical abilities. For instance, the rate of anxiety and depression rises between factory workers, and in the end, it will decrease their quality of life. So, laborers who work in factories are at a high risk of mental and physical disorders.
Secondly, the average salary of workers is usually lower than the national average salary. Hence, it causes high poverty in labor's society which leads to lower education for them. Consequently, the rate of criminality increases in the whole society because evidence shows that people who have lower education tend to violate the law more than those who have higher educations. So, lower payment has a direct relationship with criminality.
Finally, with more modern cities that are the direct fruit of new factories and companies, immigration between farmers will rise because of factories. Moreover, it leads the whole country to the lack of raw materials. Therefore, the rate of import for goods and other materials grows tremendously, and it causes inflation for the country's economics.
In conclusion, being self-employed could benefit people the most because it guarantees their mental and physical health and protects society and the nation by better economics and lower criminality and poverty rate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'decrease'
Suggestion: decrease
... factory-workers and in the end it will decreases their quality of life. So, labors who w...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...and lower criminality and poverty rate. Hence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3198757764 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77329888087 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2964950526 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0625 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16047316314 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427129022756 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566039159101 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897151553153 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667066853647 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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