nowadays many people choose to be self-employed. rather than to work for a company. why might this be the case? what could be disadvantages of being self-employed?
After the industrial revolution many farmer's and peasant's herds immigrated to modern cities with new factories and companies to find a job. Since then many debates have been appeared between philosophers and socialists about workers and working. While the head of the capitalist's theoreticians, John Stuart Mill, agree with the notion of working in the factories, Karl Marx founder of communism ideology, states that being self-employed is a better choice. In my view I agree with Marx for two vital reasons.
Firstly, due to the Marx idea, a process named alienation occurs between company's labors. It means they become alienated from their inner desires and true drives; therefore, it effects on their mental and physical abilities. For instance, the rate of anxiety and depression rises between factory-workers and in the end it will decreases their quality of life. So, labors who work in factories are at the high risk of mental and physical disorders.
Secondly, the average salary of workers is usually lower than the national average salary. Hence, it causes a high poverty between labor's society which leads to lower education between them. Consequently, the rate of criminality increases in the whole society. So, lower payment has a direct relationship with criminality.
Finally, with more modern cities which is the direct result of new factories and companies, immigration between farmers will rise because for working in that factories and it leads the whole country to the lack of raw materials. Therefore, the rate of import for goods and other material growths tremendously and it causes the inflation for the country.
In conclusion from my point of view being self-employed could benefit people the most because first it guarantees their mental and physical health and secondly it causes lower criminality and finally it improves the economics of their country. Hence, I suggest avoiding from working in companies as a worker.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'decrease'
Suggestion: decrease
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32580645161 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80021739902 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554838709677 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.692036658 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.1875 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161388159172 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439262846661 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568509833386 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089359606095 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742722736844 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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