Nowadays robots are widely used in the society. What are the benefits and risks of this?
Nowadays robots are widely used in the society. What are the benefits and risks of this?
Over past the few decades, some have called into question that robots become a way of our life and widely in the cross the world used .In my view , there is a wide-range of merits and handicaps which stemming from this state-of -the-art technology that I address the question throughout the essay with a couple of underlying reasons .
To come straight to the point , it is conspicuous that with advent of the cutting-age technology that so called robots ;loads of changes have happened thought these days ,which soar quality of humans’ life positively. Simply put, this new developed device can give a hand to get a rid of monotones lifestyle or on the other hand , a humdrum job without pay lavishly so as to just persuade one of those .Let clarified with a personal experience that I cannot remember vividly but if mu mind serves my right it was two years ago when l used towhead to university and one of those days I figure out that I might do my educational assignment very well at even at heart by means of artificial intelligent ,as a virtual and complicated robot that become a part and parcel of my dearly rations.In fact , if I did not use this up to the minute technology to borden my horizon and save my time instead of the browsing the internet to get a answer of questions , I would not gain a great deal of rewarding experience in my field .
On the other hand , it goes without saying that using robots as a new theology that still possess a loge road to make bring about achievements and this a simple reason why it can lead to a plenty of drawbacks of the all the societies as a whole .To being with , if we just use those robots that help for the sake of homework chores , not only we will not make our needs but also those trigger to difficulties. As an example ,we just seethed in teddies life without ups and downs and even those have profound influence in our posture and physical well-being due to the fact homework chores can be a good interior exercise ;thus, we need be consider how use robots .
To sum up, considering the point above mention , the most rational conclusion to be drawn it that ;I have deeply-held bilielf that privileges ,although stemming from this technlogy , I assume should not be ignored the negative points that based on this man-made good .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, thus, well, as to, in fact, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57476635514 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59371946908 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570093457944 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.1344086022 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 225.866110782 48.9658058833 461% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 244.75 100.406767564 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.5 20.6045352989 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.75 5.45110844103 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284001551135 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206883615606 0.076458572812 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.219173194239 0.0737576698707 297% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280234116891 0.150856017488 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.361182102371 0.0645574589148 559% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 11.7677419355 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 58.1214874552 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.1575268817 213% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.0537634409 231% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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