Nowadays, the world is developing at a very rapid pace and we are constantly forced to make a lot of choices that can affect the rest of our lives. Do you agree or disagree with the idea that we should always ask someone else for help when we need to make an important decision? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Some people believe that it is primordial to ask for help when it is needed. However, others think otherwise. They state that it is important to go own our own because this way when falling we may learn from our mistakes and will be able to salvage. In my opinion, it is crucial to ask for help especially when we need to make important decisions. I feel this way as I will talk over in this article.
First of all, important decisions require a huge amount of effort and we cannot simply take any direction stating that we are right because if we, afterwards, make a mistake, maybe the falling may be colossal and we may not be able to recover. For example, one of my friends opened a business with two other colleagues. Everything was astounding at first with them making a lot of profits, but after one year of business, his colleagues pull his legs and he lost the business. Thankfully, after some months he could get over the situation and started a new job in another company. Therefore, this example illustrates the desideratum of asking others' opinion before taking action.
Moreover, the importance of talking to someone about important decisions to make comes with reaching our goals in life. Sometimes, we may not be happy when we go our own about a specific situation. For instance, two friends of mine have started the same course in the university as I did. In the beginning everything was fine and easy however, almost at the end, they realized that that course had not fulfilled their wishes. Thus, they had to finish such course and started the master degree in another field of knowledge. Then, this instance elucidates again the necessity of asking for advice.
Finally, I strongly believe that it is crucial to ask for help especially when we need it the most because this way we will be fending off drawbacks as loosing jobs and making the right choice when choosing a career to follow.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 631, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...e illustrates the desideratum of asking others opinion before taking action Moreover ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56379821958 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4394976206 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504451038576 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 337.0 20.1344086022 1674% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1538.0 100.406767564 1532% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 337.0 20.6045352989 1636% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 138.0 5.45110844103 2532% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28638992126 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.28638992126 0.076458572812 375% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197185426037 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363720019422 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 168.5 11.7677419355 1432% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -262.12 58.1214874552 -451% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 133.5 10.1575268817 1314% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.65 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.93 8.01818996416 286% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 10.002688172 520% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 136.8 10.0537634409 1361% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 137.0 10.247311828 1337% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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