Nowadays, the world is developing at a very rapid pace and we are constantly forced to make a lot of choices that can affect the rest of our lives. Do you agree or disagree with the idea that should always ask someone else for help when we need to make an important decision? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Due to the complexity of modern era, we overwhelm with pelenty of choices that each of them has significant imact on our lifes. Many people like to make decisions independently and without giving any advice. However, personally,I agree with this statement and in the following paragraphs I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons justifing my point of views.
First, we don't enough knowledge in every aspect. every day, we encounter lots of new information, methods ,techniques, and approaches in every field. Thus, we need someone who really aware of that field in order to give us impeccable advice to choose the best way. As a case in point, two years ago, I was fed up using public transportation and wanted to buy a vehicle for driving, after a lot of time surfing on the internet, I decided to buy a car using gas as a fuel. accidentially, one of my friends called me and I explained my decision. He was well informed about cars so he recommended me to buy electrisity cars. I found his advice very great because it costs less money and also it was more environmentally friendlly. Thus, it was really benefitial.
second,consultation helps us to be aware of advantages and disadvantages of our dicisions in a better way.we cann't see all aspects of a choice. every person has her or his unique opinions so it guide us to figure out the benefits and the risks of our dicisions. I remember when I was teenager I wanted to be a teacher. but my cosultant at the highschool said that I'm very impentient serious and I take quickly decisions, therefore, stock brocker could be better choice for me. Now I work in stock marcket and I am really successful in my career because of my characters that my consultant mentioned to me.
consequently, I strongly believe that we should use other opinions in our decisions because we don't have enough information and because we can see all advantages and disadvantage of our choices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, really, second, so, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74404761905 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04568856268 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7114307356 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7647058824 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173360231659 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475554332164 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429858801614 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108410434688 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356875412301 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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