Some people think that they can learn much more by themselves than if they work with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to get help from a skilled teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your choice.
learning and its approaches are always controversial topics among people who want
to be educated. although some people like to study on their own way, personally, I prefer enlisting
the helping hands of experienced teachers. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I
will explore in following paragraphs.
to begin with, teachers are trained and educated to convey information in a more effective
and convenient way. instructors spend several years in the universities to learn how they
can teach students in proper ways. as a result they can help us understand concepts and
idea of lessons in a simple way. my own experience is a compelling example of this. when I
was at high school I had to remember periodic table which is contained all chemical
substances. At first I thought that I couldn't learn them at all due to the fact that it has
a huge names with its details. However, my teacher thought me a very simple way which
all chemicals have their own sorts with specific characteristics. as a result I used that
way and now after 5 years I still remember most of the chemicals with their traits.
if I hadn't a teacher who had hands-on experience ,I would never learn that much
information.
second, learning by themselves are very time and energy- consuming.
we don't have any experience and even much information about topics we are reading about.
as a result, we have to spend a lot of time to become familiar with the concepts.
some times this leads to overwhelming. for instance, two years ago I took math course.
in that course I want to learn some extra concept which help me for my paper at the next semester.
I got several books from library. the more I read these books, the more I became struggle
. after two weeks, I ask one of my professors and he explained all concepts in just one hour!
IN CONCLUSION, I strongly believe that it is a prudent course of action to take advantages of
instructors' the helping hands. due to the fact that they have first hand information and
practical educators to teach us in a way with remarkable ease. and also it takes less time
.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, still, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74932614555 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7596235767 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544474393531 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8809665553 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6086956522 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1304347826 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69565217391 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.53405017921 529% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 39.0 5.5376344086 704% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208925148544 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549521957024 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375756806986 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547407330626 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405440550427 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.