Nowadays, the world is developing at a very rapid pace and we are constantly forced to make a lot of choices that can affect the rest of our lives. Do you agree or disagree with the idea that should always ask someone else for help when we need to make an important decision? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Since the dawn of humanity, making though decisions have played a crucial role in the life of human beings. In this line of of thought, some people are of the opinion that during this process consulting with a wise person is very important; opposing the idea, others believe that each person knows better and they should decide merely. I personally, subscribe to the view that people have to ask others helping them because of two main reasons. In the following paragraphs, my reasons will be elaborated on this issue on more detail.
To begin with, people are not alone in difficult situation; there is not any secret behind the fact that most of the residents experience same situation with each other. generally speaking, as social creatures, individuals live in the society to interact with others, and because of the homological characters, people can trust others’ experiments. For example, mothers and fathers were young one day, and they decided which major should choose or which path they should continue. Therefore, they have foresight and children can consult with them in tough situations. my personal experiment is compelling example for this issue. it had been very difficult for me to choose my major and future carrier when I was in high school, and my father helped me because he was in the same condition when he was as young as me. The more social interactions have a society, the more similarities people might consider.
Another reason is that, sometimes people cannot claim that they see the big picture while others who actually care about those people life can inform them about the broad perspective of their decisions. In fact, people as one side of their life cannot distinguish their wrong decisions. it would be the opportunity, if others, who really pay attention to them, notice it. For instance, last year, attributing to finding new job, I wanted to buy a house which it had very affordable price for me. I thought that I can borrow the money form bank and put my entire saving budget for renting it. However, my wife was against the idea; as a result of the situation that the job was contemporary, and it was feasible for me to lose it. actually, it happened and had I bought the house I could not have paid the lone of bank, and it probably could have ruin my life.
Drawing upon the reasons that I mentioned above, although there are several exceptions excluded from general rules, I feel that people should ask others about their decisions. Not only do people live in the same situation and their experiments could be analogues to each other, but also sometimes people take wrong decisions which others can inform them about the consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, really, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2234.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86710239651 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55458491579 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7948480487 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.7 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.95 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109490951295 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340635669609 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0225523610973 0.0737576698707 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708263890006 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210157706353 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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