The opinion of artists and celebrities are more important for youths than they are to older people. Are you agree or disagree with this ?
The issue of whether if the opinnion of artists and celebrities are more important for youths than they are to older people is a very controversial one. On the one hand, supporters of the idea that oppinions of celebrities are more important to youths believe that today social media, is part or our live and also those oppinions can help to develop talents of young. On the other hand, critics of this opine that older people do not need to pay attention to celebrities. I maintain that young people pay more attention to celebrities opinion.
Since the beginning young people have take part on socio-cultural progress in every society. Today young people have access to uncontables technologies. For example, younger generation can easily access to a celebrity profile on facebook, instagram or snapchat. They follow concerts, events, reality shows. For example, my daugther is a fan of Selena Gomez, she takes pretty serious any coment that selena does on instagram. Selena does many important activities for children and people sick with cancer and aids, that is very important for my daugther. Basically youths are more identified with celebrities opinion and life style because their access to social media.
In addition, when young people follow the opinions of celebrities they can develop new talents. Younger generation requiere of guidance, following the opinion of celebrities youths can become a better educated workforce. For example, my cousin Eva likes to see a tv show named Dancing with the stars. She enjoys that show very much. After Imitations on dancers, singers and following the judges opinion she decided apply for a Dance academy. The celebrities opinions have been very beneficial for her future.
As a result, the opinions of celebrities could be very important on youth development for the future.
In sum, while the topic if the opinions of celebrities are more important for young people than for older people is very controversial. I believe that those opinions are more importants for young people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17575757576 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75407036607 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493939393939 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1537980769 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39853241347 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131444695888 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104835213615 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258991571019 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685679494601 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.