Glass is a favored building material for modern architecture, yet it is also very dangerous for wild birds. Because they often cannot distinguish between glass and open air, millions of birds are harmed every year when they try to fly through glass window
The reading passage and the speaker most certainly disagree on one topic. While the article has three reasons to support the topic of how responsible businesses companies can use several solutions to prevent birds to be injured with glass windows the professor casts doubt on them.
First, the reading passage proposes the use of one-way glass which is transparent in only one direction as a solution to avoid injuries on birds. However, the professor explains that one way glass reflect objects like a mirror, that glass could be as bad as regular glasses. Birds do not understand mirrors. If they see the reflection of the sky or a reflected tree they flight into the glass.
The reading passage point's out a second solution. It proposes to paint colorful lines or other designs on regular window glass. People inside the room still would see through the openings in the design where there is not painting. However, the speaker explains that also there are some problems. Birds could perceive the openings on the design as wholes and try to flight through them. One solution would be to make smaller the unpainting areas, but rooms would turn darker for people inside there.
Finally, the article proposes to create a magnetic field to guide birds away from buildings. The speaker does not see this as a solution neither. Birds use magnetic fields as a way to oriented themselves when they travel long distances before winter . This ability is not seem used to travel short distances, birds use lights and their eyes on short distances.
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...cted tree they flight into the glass. The reading passage points out a second...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 260.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39775735269 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9725041186 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4375 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06452816374 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197583348725 0.272083759551 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059647858407 0.0996497079465 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485575577485 0.0662205650399 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110705968102 0.162205337803 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508322455696 0.0443174109184 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.3589403974 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.