In recent years, many frog species around the world have declined in numbers or even gone extinct due to changes in their environment. These population declines and extinctions have serious consequences for the ecosystems in which frogs live.

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In recent years, many frog species around the world have declined in numbers or even gone extinct due to changes in their environment. These population declines and extinctions have serious consequences for the ecosystems in which frogs live.

The reading passage and the listening passage most certainly disagree on just the topic about how to solve the problem of declining frogs populations.
First at all, the reading passage explains that frogs populations have being harmed by pesticides. Laws would prohibited farmers using pesticides near frog populations. On the other hand, the speaker disagree with the methods that I read. Decreasing use of pesticides is not economically practical, that is unfair. Farmers that follow regulations about the use if pesticides could be in severe disadvantage with farmers located far away from frog populations. It would be traduce on lost of more crops, which could take many years to recuperate.
Second, the reading passage discusses the use of an antinfungal medications and treatments with heat to treat a fungus that threatens severally frogs' population. However, the speaker points out that there are a couple of problems with the application of an antifungal medication that prevent fungus spreading all over frogs population. The treatment should be apply to each individual, this is extremely difficult to a large scale. Antifungals application have to continue to apply from one generation to another in order to obtain positive results. It is a complicated and expensive method.
Finally, the article states that frogs' habitats are threatened for human activities. On the other hand, the speaker explains that the real problem causing damages on frogs' habitat is the global warning. Water used in developing areas is not a biggest threat. The water used by humans is unlike to prevent changes on the habitat for global warming.
In sum, by giving all these three reasons the speaker goes against the reading article.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...with the methods that I read. Decreasing use of pesticides is not economically pr...
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...d be in severe disadvantage with farmers located far away from frog populations. ...
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...h could take many years to recuperate. Second, the reading passage discusses th...
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...gal medications and treatments with heat to treat a fungus that threatens several...
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... treat a fungus that threatens severally frogs population. However, the speaker...
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... threatens severally frogs population. However, the speaker points out that the...
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... the speaker points out that there are a couple of problems with the application...
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...n that prevent fungus spreading all over frogs population. The treatment should b...
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...in positive results. It is a complicated and expensive method. Finally, the ...
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...ults. It is a complicated and expensive method. Finally, the article states ...
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...global warning. Water used in developing areas is not a biggest threat. The water...
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...areas is not a biggest threat. The water used by humans is unlike to prevent cha...
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...is not a biggest threat. The water used by humans is unlike to prevent changes o...
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...ges on the habitat for global warming. In sum, by giving all these three reason...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, so, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 275.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30181818182 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82491863409 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567272727273 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9714188685 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7647058824 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 21.698381199 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41176470588 7.06452816374 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 4.19205298013 477% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13994270889 0.272083759551 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426813060776 0.0996497079465 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368240118496 0.0662205650399 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071250521805 0.162205337803 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262763985321 0.0443174109184 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 63.6247240618 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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