In order to be successful, businesses must put more money in advertising.
In today’s sophisticated world how introducing manufacture’s products is a significant factor to make more profit. While numerous behavioral scholars believe which advertising has a number of bad effects on young people and can increase juvenile delinquency, the vast majority of advertising expertise hold the opinion that manufacturers should invest more money to advertise their products in TV broadcasts. However, my point view is that all organization should put more money in advertising. In what follows I will elaborate my viewpoint for several reasons.
To beginning, today’s people are busier with their work or their family. To be more specific, a number of individuals work a plethora of hours in the day to make better life conditions and increase their quality of life. Besides, when they back home, they are involved in doing house chores, caring, or upbringing children. So, they don’t have abundance time for surfing the internet and searching about the manufacturer companies. Consequently, the more investigation in advertising on TV broadcast, the more you have chance to be seen as the best producer. Furthermore, many recent studies have shown that companies which spend 10 percent of their income is advertising, make more money than other companies which don’t care about doing so.
Secondly, I admire the behavioral psychologist’s concern about the effects of advertising, although children do what they see on the screen, on the contrary there are a lot of ways to keep children far from TV broadcast or the inhibited one. I mean that, government can introduce a law for showing advertising on TV. For instance, they can inhibit showing advertising which has violated or sexual content on series or movies. In addition, parents can filter and ban this content for children, and in case of being seen by children, punish them. So, in this situation, we can assure the behavioral scientist about inappropriate content.
Thirdly, the increased money which came from more advertising and consequently more sell by companies, can be investigated to make new jobs to develop the organization. In this situation many the graduated person can find a job and the unemployment rate will be decreased. Moreover, decreasing the unemployment rate can decrease juvenile delinquency.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that organizations and companies should put more money on advertising to introduce their services and their production. This way helps them to sells more and make a lot of money which can investigate the increased money on their production to improve their product’s quality.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for instance, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38834951456 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13439651479 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533980582524 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 680.4 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9636726344 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22485977259 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737163852131 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760764223516 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144649312769 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541226818038 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.