our kids less creative and lazier than before
Are our kids less creative and lazier than before as a consequence of advancement in technology? I definitely think that answer to this question is, No
This is my firm belief that today children can access to the huge ocean of information and growth their creativity very well by help of technology more than the past. For a number of reasons and I will develop these ideas in subsequent paragraphs.
My primary reason is that with advance in technology, kids have a lot of sources for making their brian powerful and being creative than the past. Today children have easy access to great documantries with their I pad and also can delives to the spread scientific or historical matters with access to the internet. You see, in the past source for learning was out of reach easly but new requipments are so handy and change the meaning of learning and kids can easily access to them and improve their creativity.
Secondly, new technology prepare a great context for growing imaginantion skills between kids. Drawing from my own experience my little boy useing various softwares for improve his skills. I see that he use 3D MAX to contract some 3d shapes and buliding and this kind of excersice lead him to being creative.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that technology make children more creative than the past. Not only by proveding a spearse and handy sources but also make them more creative with vitual context for improvement ability of kid' s brian.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: Now
... think that answer to this question is, No This is my firm belief that today chil...
^^
Line 8, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... lead him to being creative. In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strong...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 256.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84765625 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6220424885 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58984375 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6681702263 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.818181818 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23580592558 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111346543808 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.204628605863 0.0737576698707 277% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16505822978 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179511094956 0.0645574589148 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: Now
... think that answer to this question is, No This is my firm belief that today chil...
^^
Line 8, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... lead him to being creative. In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strong...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 256.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84765625 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6220424885 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58984375 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6681702263 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.818181818 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23580592558 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111346543808 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.204628605863 0.0737576698707 277% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16505822978 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179511094956 0.0645574589148 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.