Our past experiences shape the way we look at people and the world around us.
What are some of the experiences that have shaped your outlook and the way you live now? Use specific examples to support your answer.
Past is experience, a present is what you making it and future is something you are unaware of- these three are essentials of a lifetime. One surely learns from past experiences and keep on improving from these experiences.
There are many incidences from the past in my life, that helped me change my perspective for many people and the world which I live in. One of my personal experience was during my first job. I came across a group of senior professionals who always encouraged me to perform in best possible ways for the organization. I was a fresher back then and I used to rely on and appreciate all the efforts my seniors put in me to do the best in my abilities. This one-year long experience helped me to get a new job with a salary hike and when I informed this to my seniors they were extremely happy for me. After joining the new organization, I always missed the comfort and technical discussion of my previous organization. One day I called my previous manager and discussed with her how I missed the organization. To my surprise, she offered me the job again in the organization with a new title and job responsibilities since they all were very fond of me. I was recruited back and was extremely happy to join back the same organization. However, as the days passed by I could see the changed behaviors of few colleagues towards me. I was quite worried and discussed the same with the manager. The manager suggested me to focus on work and just leave everything else behind. I took her suggestion and didn't think about the events that took place. Next day, few of my colleagues who were very close to me both personally and professionally went to my manager and objected my title and salary hike. They opinionated that with such a small experience I was not capable enough to get such rewards. I was quite disappointed with them and felt really emotional that day. I realized that in a workplace you can never share a personal bond with anybody. Many people will be good on your face but eventually will talk behind your back to misrepresent and make yourself look lower. I don't trust anyone easily now and always try to communicate information which is required to be known.
Moving further, on sharing another experience one day I recently went shopping with my mother. My mother insisted me on buying certain fabric due to its good quality. However, due to my adamant nature we ended up buying fabric of my choice which she didn't like. However, she was proved right because the day I got my garment stitched from my choice of fabric it got torn from sides where sewing was done. My mother already told me about the garment's quality based on her experiences still I fought with her and took the fabric due to its good looks. I was quite upset that day but I realized my fault and was sorry for the same. This experience made me realize that we should listen to our elders in their areas of expertise and always try an understand their perspective. Looks won't last long and will fade away one day, quality stays throughout life. This holds true in case of people as well whom we get attracted to based on looks rather than their nature and quality of good deeds.
These few experiences from my past, helped me changed my perspective for many people both personally and professionally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...s of a lifetime. One surely learns from past experiences and keep on improving from these experi...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...als who always encouraged me to perform in best possible ways for the organization. I w...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... else behind. I took her suggestion and didnt think about the events that took place....
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...present and make yourself look lower. I dont trust anyone easily now and always try ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...up buying fabric of my choice which she didnt like. However, she was proved right bec...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...their areas of expertise and always try an understand their perspective. Looks wont last long...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, really, so, still, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 100.0 43.0788530466 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2722.0 1977.66487455 138% => OK
No of words: 592.0 407.700716846 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59797297297 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93265142912 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69208853279 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476351351351 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 874.8 618.680645161 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3058080424 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8064516129 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0967741935 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.93548387097 5.45110844103 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105368040426 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310387183518 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339388629944 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843938960077 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189970247044 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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