Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.
Education has an influential and tremendous impact on our lives. In fact, it is utterly important to start educating the young generations from early ages because they can guide the nation toward an imperative progress. Moreover, nowadays, the government provide them with free educational facilities due to its benefits in both terms of improving the educational level and reduce the financial burden on their parents.However, due to the new technological development that happens within the contemporary era, many kids squander their time in these technological innovations rather than spending their spare time with their guardians to assist them with their education. In the following paragraphs, I will explain my opinion more clearly.
To begin with, It is vital for the children to instill the concrete basis of the learning from early ages because this will guide them to a success in their study and their future jobs. Indeed, the youngsters are more receptive to acquire knowledge than the older kids because they are like a sponge able to absorb the information quickly and efficiently, and this reflects positively on their future personality. For instance, before ten years I was at the elementary school and my mother provided me with the basic and fundamental data and skills that, in turn, improve my learn level and widen my disciplinary. However, after these ten years, many new technological devices were available. Thus, I was obsessed to be up to date with the new advancement. Hence, rather than spending time with my mother and ask her to help me with my homework, I tempted to use my smartphone to search for what I need instead of focusing my mind on her valuable lessons. As a result, I began to depend on myself rather than ask her to aid me. Consequently, due to the new technologies, kids sway to carve and harvest knowledge by using their smart devices rather than asking their parents.
Second, it is critical to establish the solid foundation of the communication skills from early ages because they are the guiding lights to achieve a myriad amount of goals. In fact, children consuming their times these days by using the new innovations rather than improving their large interpersonal relationships and this reflect negatively on their relationship with their parents and will, in turn, have a bad impact on their studying career. For example, parents in the past created a friendlier atmosphere that helps their children to express themselves easily and clearly. Furthermore, learn them to cooperate efficiently and collaborate effectively and such a collaborative environment enhance their communication skills immensely which have a great influence on their future personalities and their studying outcome. In contrast, in the present, kids consume most of their spare time with their laptops and computers. Thus, they used to be isolated and that what makes them more vulnerable to a wide range of obstacles in their schools because they lack such a skill. In conclusion, parents are less involved in their kid's lives these days due to the leap of technological development.
To sum up, the new generations are less related to their families due to the modern innovations that reflect negatively on their studying abilities because they will not benefit from their parent's experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'imperative progress'.
Suggestion: imperative progress
...ecause they can guide the nation toward an imperative progress. Moreover, nowadays, the government pro...
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Line 1, column 420, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...e the financial burden on their parents.However, due to the new technological developme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, hence, however, moreover, second, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2795.0 1977.66487455 141% => OK
No of words: 538.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19516728625 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94526391665 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492565055762 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 868.5 618.680645161 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.2875822026 48.9658058833 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.75 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 5.45110844103 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26104574597 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823230628204 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066250416504 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16806795787 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594239058154 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 86.8835125448 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 10.002688172 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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