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In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure successful future

Considering the life as a modern and newly environment, most jobs and their requirement would change over the cores of time. Through passing this modern and technological environment people should adopt their job with an updating demands. In fact, development environment effectively influences on people career which is really disaster the future job opportunities. As far as I am concern former life was so easier in case of secure job following with success than newly. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, by developing the technology some careers will obsoleted and other will provide new opportunity for individuals. As a result of this phenomena people may lose their position in some criteria which sound impossible and have changed their approach to deal with different issues. For example, consider the manufactures in the past which involved larger amounts of labors with itself to produce products. By increasing the level of technological material in modern days this manufactures had to abolish deluge number of worker from that and use some development machines which is the symptom of the modern societies. this change in this case clearly indicates the rule of advanced technology machines and their negative impacts on people’s career which is really arduous to control and manage it.
Second, due to the competitive environment that humane are experiencing, an abrupt change would be happened that every one's career would be influenced by them. regardless the sudden event that happen in every daily schedules of people's life finding career and being successful becoming a risky and somehow chancy. In other word people must be more conscious about their environment and adopt themselves with every new event. One of my own example is a good case in point. I was working as an engineer in a large and safe economic company. An abrupt change happens in the world in case of infection disease, which Couse many negative effects on the worlds job opportunity Due to the fact that government and many companies had decided to spend their money to address this conflict which engaged all the people with itself, I loosed my job also I had to justify my career with new circumstances.
In conclusion, I firmly agree that finding job in the former era was easier than today. It not only is for the development of technology but also is for sudden change that are continually involved with the earth problems.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... disaster the future job opportunities. As far as I am concern former life was so ...
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Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'obsolete'
Suggestion: obsolete
...loping the technology some careers will obsoleted and other will provide new opportunity ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 627, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...is the symptom of the modern societies. this change in this case clearly indicates t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Regardless
...nes career would be influenced by them. regardless the sudden event that happen in every d...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, second, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05609756098 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77288755875 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519512195122 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9909505581 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158037301458 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550884980024 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582841770912 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106520015895 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584007654809 0.0645574589148 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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