People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Why do people attend college or university? Career preparation? Experience? Increased knowledge? University is an higher education institute where students can enroll to their preferred course of study. Personally, I believe people attend college or university for career preparation. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the college or university is the best way to prepare for a prospective career like an engineer, a doctor , a lawyer, etc. at the university or college, you get to learn the basics and rudiments your prospective career requires. You are taught the fundamentals and principles of your course of study for 4 to 5 years, you go internships, you conduct research. All these are preparing for your career. For example, all my life, I have always wanted study engineering. After graduating high school, the only way to achieve my career aspirations is to attend the university. I gained admission to study Civil engineering, I spent five years in the university, gathered experiences through internships, research works and others. Currently, I work as a construction manager for a renowned firm. I am happy and ebullient to practice engineering.
Secondly, attending university gave me the opportunity to meet a lot of friends, I was able to expand my horizon because I grew up in a small town and I was restricted to some social amenities. The university enabled me to move to the city, I was able to network with friends. There was one important friend I made during my study at the university, after our graduation, we stayed in touch with each other via social media. After some moths, he was the one that connected me to the CEO of the firm I currently work. The CEO was a friend of his father. Through him I was able to get my dream job and I am currently fulfilling my career aspirations.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that people should attend colleges or universities for career preparation. This is because I was able to study and practice my dream profession by attending the university.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nce? Increased knowledge? University is an higher education institute where studen...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ective career like an engineer, a doctor , a lawyer, etc. at the university or col...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rofession by attending the university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93465909091 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06238977057 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4707384797 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7142857143 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7619047619 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312175132596 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112781029821 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127044377863 0.0737576698707 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233884265177 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131358823122 0.0645574589148 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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